I’ve always wanted to try the “American Sentence” but it seemed rather intimidating. How can one sentence be a poem? Can it? If you’re new to the form, there’s a ton of information online including here.
Allen Ginsberg visualized 17 syllables in one straight line encapsulating the ‘shadow of the moment’. This is an interesting ask. Also, without the constraints of haiku, the form paints more modern images in an everyday context-observations of life as it passes, reflecting the crude, raw face of reality.
Well, I had to try it now, as we slip into the last few days of Micropoetry Month!!! Share your ‘American Sentence’ or any other form of micropoetry using comments or Mister Linky.
(1)
Taking a picture with a strange cloud, I stumble over its shadow.
(2)
How easily I reduce my day into unpunctuated texts.
(3)
See this round earth flatten itself into rectangular devices.
(4)
From Basho to Ginsberg, a thought stretches, then curls, then stretches again.
(5)
Sunday morning, the sky too wears the grey silence of a hangover.
I am so sorry am so far behind on the reading and commenting…will catch up for sure…those American sentences are addictive reading – your last one really the standard set, lovely.
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Thanks Hamish. Drop in whenever it is convenient.. the world moves slow here!! 🙂
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Love yours! I think I like this form…..short and sweet!
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Thank you Vivian..it is a most interesting form!
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Lovely Rajani. haiku know also as one breath poems can be written in one sentence which most haiku writers call One Liners
Enjoyed your poems today
much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena.. must check out the one breath haiku… sounds beautiful.
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Oh, you really did well. Love all, but quite taken with the last.
Anna :o]
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Thank you Anna 🙂
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Wow! How you make each word shine in all of them, even in that grey sky. No 4 is my favorite.
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Thanks Sumana… I think am beginning to like this form.. though I was pretty unsure of how it would work as “poetry”.
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I like the form. You did well, especially like the last one.
Pat
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Thanks so much 🙂
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shoeless existence horned into seventeen foot bytes 🙂
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That’s 13 syllables!!! But love it!! 🙂 🙂
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I used the syllable count method used by Hamurrabi: every time one is distracted, you increase the count by one. The reader is expected to get distracted as many times. That way we maintain the count at all times. Quite simple actually.
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Adopted as life lesson!! Though there is a howmanysyllables.com that works like a counter-god.
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You did well!!! I have not written one in a while. I seem to only write it if there is a prompt and yet, they are so beautiful to read…yours, I mean [beams]
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Thanks so much… it was much fun writing these!!!
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