While I prefer to break away from the 5-7-5 scheme and other traditional haiku rules, I still think haiku or senryu (in its modern avatar) should seize the essence of a moment anchored in the close observation of nature. This is truly the hardest form of poetry to get right- to be simple yet profound, layered yet obvious, beautiful yet utterly truthful.
(1)
contrary-
contrary to the summer rain
this endless waiting
(2)
pleated morning
she hides my unfinished dreams
in her folds
(3)
mangled sky
together we watchΒ
orange tulips filling with rain
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Wonderfully done, Rajani.And I do agree with your definition of haiku. π
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Thanks so much Celestine! Glad you agree!!!!
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the ‘orange tulips’ my favourite haiku
much love…
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Thank you Gillena π
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Another beautiful set, Rajani.
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Thanks so much π
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Well that was the most succint description of haiku have read. V nicely put. Now will read the haiku!
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Thank you π
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shadow of a hawk
floats on the lawn and lane –
flies before the wind
I saw this today and the haiku popped into my head. I actually think because of its connection to nature and the seasons and its encapsulating a moment in time that this is one of the easiest of forms. Thanks for letting us post here. It is good to finally post one for your Microppoetry month.
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Thanks so much Toni.. lovely to see you here. And such a lovely haiku, the shadow before the wind is a great image!
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I was a cold windy day and I watched the shadow being blown about. A different view of taka – hawk.
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We see kites here, coming for pigeons and rats no doubt!!! The city garbage keeps them well fed!
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Universal Recipe for Rejection
(Replace word “that” with one representing
absolutely any elective activity known to man)
Oh, you do…
That…
I didn’t know.
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Yes of course!! How easily that connection can snap. Thanks Ana.
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river wild
river free
today
where are you taking me
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How nice to see you here TioStib. Thanks for sharing. Surrendering to that mystery is a joy, isn’t it!
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Indeed, my poet friend, indeed.
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