sweet tears of parting
strung on gossamer threads
around dawn’s soft neck
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sweet tears of parting
from the dark eyes of the night
still bearing your scent
unspoken words
strung on gossamer threads
straining the moonlight
broken promises
weave a web of untruths
around dawn’s soft neck
THOUGHT PURGE 
It’s amazing what a spider’s web can evoke. Beautifully written, with lovely layers of interpretations. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 Glad you liked it!!
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Ah … the tears of betrayal … gossamer drops on a spider’s web – for me the symbol of invisible danger, the poor fly only realizes its peril when it’s too late … intriguing a well written troiku with many layers of meaning and love how you placed it in that lovely photo! Brava Thotpurge.
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Thanks so much Bastet. The beauty and danger of the cobweb lends itself to interpretation very well I think!
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I do so agree … and you’ve written a fantastic piece here!
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Wonderful – what starts as a powerful, beautiful haiku, opens up to reveal a ‘sting in its tail’ – what a unique, original idea, refreshing, and works so well. It has changed the whole idea of Kristjaan’s troiku, into soething exciting and new, carrying hidden messages. You are a writer of rare talent and insight.
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Thanks Hamish..your kind words always encourage me. Loved your haiku on the kukai… congrats!
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