In this town, where light fears to sleep,
worn sun beams weep,
outside prism doors,
on mottled floors.
The black night with the sickle eye,
knocks on the sky,
the lone monk whirls
where twilight curls.
Star silhouettes against the white,
blink out of sight,
as cobwebbed dreams,
swallow their screams.
Haunting piece..it speaks to my of my sleepless nights when insomnia has me in a leash
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Thank you Susie 🙂
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The images in this piece are haunting, Rajani. I love the feeling of the fearful light, weeping outside of prism doors, yet surrounded by the splotches of light who have made the journey before them (or so I felt as I read this). Beautiful!
Peace
Michael
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Thank you. It is hard isn’t it when the expected order of things is upset.. or so we perceive in our own weakness.
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What great images you conjure! The sickle eye–just vibrant!
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Thanks so much Audrey
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Beautifully penned. And liked the new form….not easy, though…
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Thank you Panchali
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Intriguing, and kinda scary (and Halloween is coming!)
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Thank you Timoteo
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I like the form.. and yes the sickle eye is such an interesting image.. I like it
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Thank you Bjorn 🙂
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I love the dark night with a sickle. We do push away and crowd out the darkest of night!
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True!! Thank you Colleen!
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That’s an interesting form, nicely done! I can relate to those swallowed screams. Argh.
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Thank you Marian. Yes, the form is much fun though the 4 syllable lines are quite a challenge!
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The dark and the bright sides of night portrayed beautifully. Will try this poetic form too. Thanks.
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That’s great Vandana, look forward to reading it..do link back! Thank you!
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