all that I will ever know
all the stars I will ever see
all the poems I will ever write
all – I will ever be
is finite;
life draws a small, irregular border
around me:
here, this is your garden
now flutter your wings
now create your chaos
within it
some things, though, have a vastness
the universe struggles to contain them
you think you understand how they
push past the lines
how they reach beyond
but you can’t know it
sometimes you can’t see it
except maybe one morning, early,
when the dew is still ripe on leaves
you are walking in your little garden
and you think you see something move
some light pulse
something alighting on a branch near you
and you turn and see it
fresh morning catch in its beak still writhing
just a bird, hungry, on a branch
the sun behind it
the sky behind it
a definitive frame
and you turn and see it
and for one moment
it looks down
and it sees you
it sees through you
and the frame collapses
and the lines vanish
wings flutter: bird wings,
angel wings, soul wings,
the garden is endless
the chaos is endless
and for one moment
so are you
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I liked the use of second person and present tense in this poem.
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks so much, TioStib.
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This poem starts off like a trickle then opens out and ends so beautifully with the concept of vastness.
“the garden is endless
the chaos is endless
and for one moment
so are you”
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Thanks so much…
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I like this very much.
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Thanks so much, Martha… of course, the prompt was borders and I wanted to write about nations and borders and war and occupation, but this is what I ended up writing!
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Sometimes it’s good to surrender. ❤️ I’m glad you did.
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Because of the tags you post these poems with, I suspect you are writing these fresh every day. They show amazing insight. Quite ready for prime time
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Thanks Pablo. Yes, am writing everyday, but it’s a lot easier because they are my prompts, so I have had time to think about them, unlike the official napowrimo prompt that is put out fresh on the day. (Isn’t the blog as far as poetry prime time goes… 🙂 )
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This is so beautiful – that moment of connection between species. I am watching a Canadian documentary that, if you can access it, you might love – 500 Days in the Wild by Dianne Whelan, who filmed herself crossing Canada from one side to the other (through wilderness) on bike, canoe and portaging. Scenery is spectacular, journey transformative. She travelled with respect and reverence and it is wonderful to watch. Everywhere she went she was met with the kindness of First Nations.
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Thank you, Sherry. Will check if that series is available here, sounds amazing.
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Wonderful!
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Thanks so much, Bob.
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This is one of my favourites by you! Love how you depict the vastness and tininess of our worlds, the endless chaos and also the fleeting encounters with other living beings. This is a wonderFul poem!
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Thanks so much, Khaya!
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wonderful 🙂
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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So very beautiful.
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Thank you, Cindy….
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