Write Right…

Banality cuts deep. Not as much
as indifference, though. Only nature
should be afforded that privilege.

Like high tide. The relentless physics
of sea and moon. But hey human, you
must sing of beaches morphing into ports,
built with the rubble of houses, of lives.

Like morning, the helpless, careless
turning of earth. What of light, that
just is, that is revealed no matter
who is watching. Human, write of
the darkness that precedes it. Body
after body after body laid low in
unmarked graves, body after body
never found, body after body
splattered against clouds, body
after body, so small, fathers gather
them in bags just so they can do
something, anything, other than cry.

Like trees. Trees so old they know
all the prequels to your shadow.
Trees under which children played.
Trees caught in the blaze. Time
not stopping, not moving. Human,
write of the one tree still standing
amidst the ruins. As if, propping
up the sky. As if the burden of the
heavens has come to rest on shoulders
too small, too tender, too unprepared
for hero’s work. Write that Atlas,
here, is a small child. Atlas is
the sum of all the children.

Leave the silence to the earth.
It learns quietness from the
countless graves in its womb.
There are scenes behind the
scenes. There are things in
motion behind the things that
cannot move. Like flowers.
Human, write of flowers that
yearn for graves and hair and
homes and the slight breeze
that said, perfumed, look, there
is love behind love, look, there
was a lover behind the lover.

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If you’re going to write all of April and are looking for prompts, here is a list. Sometimes, we just need to look around us and write about what is going on. What is real and what can hold a mirror to the world, to ourselves. Do you want to give it a shot?

41 thoughts on “Write Right…

  1. “Write that Atlas, here, is a small child. Atlas is the sum of all the children.” Breath caught in my throat as I read this line. Your powerful words have done me in for the day. Not in a depressing way, in an incredibly amazing thoughtful way.

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  2. “Leave the silence to the earth.
    It learns quietness from the
    countless graves in its womb.”

    These lines made me shiver. I know life and death are part of the same dance, the first lively and loud… the other quiet and final (mostly). But these three lines makes it all winter and no spring. Scary, silence born of death…

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  3. Sad, dark writing, even to the last. ”Flowers  that
    yearn for graves”, even they mourn. They had hopes sooo high, disappointed. Every word you wrote fits the dismal mood. Good job!!

    Jim

    ..

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    1. Thank you… overwhelmed by the connection… Picasso made something that is still so powerfully relevant… someday, someone will gather up all the poetry of these months and hopefully it will mean something to the people going through it – that we were, at a distance, helpless but thinking of them….

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  4. Rajani, I’m not surprised that the presence of light, might not make much of a difference to the extremely difficult situation you are thinking about. Those circumstances, defy imagination, for those not living through it..At this time, both light and dark are probably equally frightening for those innocent families and little children..

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  5. Lovely poem, Rajani! As the subject of “What’s Going On?” Is Light today, I am struck particularly by these words

    “What of light, that
    just is, that is revealed no matter
    who is watching.  ”

    So very true. The progression / infusion of light just happens. We as humans have no control over it. It truly is a miracle.

    And I liked these words as well:

    “look, there
    is love behind love, look, there
    was a lover behind the lover.” 

    In some way, they expressed the same kind of idea as well, the progression, some things just happen again and again.

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  6. There is nothing banal or indifferent about this poem. It resonates long after it’s read. To think of the darkness before dawn, the tree amid the ruins, the life behind shadows, the shadows behind shadows. I will never write about the loss of beaches and shorelines to development, though I can no longer avoid writing of the life lost due to war and climate related catastrophes. You are the prophet.

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  7. Your poem is so touching, Rajani. These lines stand out for me:

    ‘Like high tide. The relentless physics
    of sea and moon. But hey human, you
    must sing of beaches morphing into ports,
    built with the rubble of houses, of lives’

    and these lines made me tearful:

    ‘…Body
    after body after body laid low in
    unmarked graves, body after body
    never found, body after body
    splattered against clouds, body
    after body, so small, fathers gather
    them in bags just so they can do
    something, anything, other than cry.’

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  8. Your poem made me think of this painting. The top is a photo of where I walk the dogs. The painting is below it. In one of his books — I think The Last Temptation of Christ, Kazantzakis write, “This is the earth. The bloody arena of mens souls.”
    These lines in your poem really captured me, “Trees so old they know all the prequels to your shadow.” I like that, in fact. It’s why one of my teachers is a tree.

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        1. That is my painting. I painted it two years before I ever saw this place. Every step we take is literally on the hopes, dreams, flesh, sorrows, fears, losses, wars, families, hunger, satiation, hopes, loves, blood, confusions — all of what makes us human — of other people. I always feel it when I’m on a trail…

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  9. This poem is wonderful – beautifully written, and it makes the reader think and realize some truths we need to be pondering. Really strong and powerful writing, Rajani. My prompt on wednesday is the light – this poem might work well for it?

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  10. Love your poem, and these are such excellent prompts. These lines especially resonated with me:

    “body
    after body, so small, fathers gather
    them in bags just so they can do
    something, anything, other than cry.” – their faces haunt me, the desolate parent unable to save their child.

    “Trees so old they know
    all the prequels to your shadow.” – so beautiful, I think of all those olive trees uprooted.

    “Human,
    write of the one tree still standing
    amidst the ruins. As if, propping
    up the sky.” – Beautiful.

    “Write that Atlas,
    here, is a small child. Atlas is
    the sum of all the children.”

    “There are things in
    motion behind the things that
    cannot move.”

    ❤️

    I hope and do believe in some ways that writing can make things right, especially for those who seek to censor. One must keep writing, because silence kills. As does indifference. I’m so glad you shared this poem 👌🏼

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  11. “Write that Atlas,here, is a small child. Atlas isthe sum of all the children.” One of many poems within this poem. Too true. Write, right? 

    Perhaps the earth’s silence is neither from shock at the too many dead, nor from indifference, but from the effort it takes to compel us to speak and write–to push for action and, too, to record. Earth is God who has many hands and feet and mouths among unrooted beings. This is a poem that needed writing–Thank you. Thank you, too, for the list of topics for April, a poem in itself.

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