Banality cuts deep. Not as much
as indifference, though. Only nature
should be afforded that privilege.
Like high tide. The relentless physics
of sea and moon. But hey human, you
must sing of beaches morphing into ports,
built with the rubble of houses, of lives.
Like morning, the helpless, careless
turning of earth. What of light, that
just is, that is revealed no matter
who is watching. Human, write of
the darkness that precedes it. Body
after body after body laid low in
unmarked graves, body after body
never found, body after body
splattered against clouds, body
after body, so small, fathers gather
them in bags just so they can do
something, anything, other than cry.
Like trees. Trees so old they know
all the prequels to your shadow.
Trees under which children played.
Trees caught in the blaze. Time
not stopping, not moving. Human,
write of the one tree still standing
amidst the ruins. As if, propping
up the sky. As if the burden of the
heavens has come to rest on shoulders
too small, too tender, too unprepared
for hero’s work. Write that Atlas,
here, is a small child. Atlas is
the sum of all the children.
Leave the silence to the earth.
It learns quietness from the
countless graves in its womb.
There are scenes behind the
scenes. There are things in
motion behind the things that
cannot move. Like flowers.
Human, write of flowers that
yearn for graves and hair and
homes and the slight breeze
that said, perfumed, look, there
is love behind love, look, there
was a lover behind the lover.
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If you’re going to write all of April and are looking for prompts, here is a list. Sometimes, we just need to look around us and write about what is going on. What is real and what can hold a mirror to the world, to ourselves. Do you want to give it a shot?
“Banality cuts deep. Not as much
as indifference, though.” That cuts like a scalpel.
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Thanks Debi…
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“Write that Atlas, here, is a small child. Atlas is the sum of all the children.” Breath caught in my throat as I read this line. Your powerful words have done me in for the day. Not in a depressing way, in an incredibly amazing thoughtful way.
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Thank you, Helen.
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The notion of layers within layers, motion behind the unmoving. I like the sense of that.
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“Leave the silence to the earth.
It learns quietness from the
countless graves in its womb.”
These lines made me shiver. I know life and death are part of the same dance, the first lively and loud… the other quiet and final (mostly). But these three lines makes it all winter and no spring. Scary, silence born of death…
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This poem was mostly a call to people..poets..to write about what is happening… so it is in the context of the war…which is chilling in itself….and scary….
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Sad, dark writing, even to the last. ”Flowers that
yearn for graves”, even they mourn. They had hopes sooo high, disappointed. Every word you wrote fits the dismal mood. Good job!!
Jim
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Thanks Jim.
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Beautiful words, despite their subject matter. This one has a deep quietness about it – and yet it reminds me of the painting Guernica, which seems to shriek. (Perhaps in this series of poems you are writing a Gernica.)
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Thank you… overwhelmed by the connection… Picasso made something that is still so powerfully relevant… someday, someone will gather up all the poetry of these months and hopefully it will mean something to the people going through it – that we were, at a distance, helpless but thinking of them….
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You capture the sorrow of these times in these lines that are anything but banal. Your poem bought tears to my eyes.
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Thanks Suzanne… it is a heartbreaking situation… 😦
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Rajani, I’m not surprised that the presence of light, might not make much of a difference to the extremely difficult situation you are thinking about. Those circumstances, defy imagination, for those not living through it..At this time, both light and dark are probably equally frightening for those innocent families and little children..
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Thanks Eileen. Yes they do defy imagination from this distance. Even though it is literally live streamed on to our devices, we can’t possibly fathom the terror.
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“is love behind love,” – Thought provoking and really interesting – lots of hidden depth here. Well written.
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Thanks Alan.
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Lovely poem, Rajani! As the subject of “What’s Going On?” Is Light today, I am struck particularly by these words
“What of light, that
just is, that is revealed no matter
who is watching. ”
So very true. The progression / infusion of light just happens. We as humans have no control over it. It truly is a miracle.
And I liked these words as well:
“look, there
is love behind love, look, there
was a lover behind the lover.”
In some way, they expressed the same kind of idea as well, the progression, some things just happen again and again.
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Thank you, Mary. Sherry commented when I first posted the poem that it would be meaningful for her prompt. We all are waiting for the end of darkness and hope inevitably light will come.
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There is nothing banal or indifferent about this poem. It resonates long after it’s read. To think of the darkness before dawn, the tree amid the ruins, the life behind shadows, the shadows behind shadows. I will never write about the loss of beaches and shorelines to development, though I can no longer avoid writing of the life lost due to war and climate related catastrophes. You are the prophet.
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Thanks Susan… the pier being built on Gaza’s beach with the rubble from people’s houses has shocked everyone… 😦 Everyday the world offers more horrors.
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Your poem is so touching, Rajani. These lines stand out for me:
‘Like high tide. The relentless physics
of sea and moon. But hey human, you
must sing of beaches morphing into ports,
built with the rubble of houses, of lives’
and these lines made me tearful:
‘…Body
after body after body laid low in
unmarked graves, body after body
never found, body after body
splattered against clouds, body
after body, so small, fathers gather
them in bags just so they can do
something, anything, other than cry.’
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Thanks Kim… it’s all of the tragedy that’s unfolding while the world watches or doesn’t even watch…all real.
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A heartfelt poem, Rajani. We shall of the darkness, maybe it will come to light! Thanks once again for taking time to come up with these prompt. Looking forward to the exercise.
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*write
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Thank you, Khaya… very excited you’ll be doing the prompts too!!
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Your poem made me think of this painting. The top is a photo of where I walk the dogs. The painting is below it. In one of his books — I think The Last Temptation of Christ, Kazantzakis write, “This is the earth. The bloody arena of mens souls.”
These lines in your poem really captured me, “Trees so old they know all the prequels to your shadow.” I like that, in fact. It’s why one of my teachers is a tree.
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This is the painting… https://marthakennedy.files.wordpress.com/2023/02/twilight-zone.png
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Is that your artwork? It speaks to me…about how ephemeral it all is…matter to matter…. and I can see how the part about the silence of the earth might have taken you there….thanks so much for sharing.
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That is my painting. I painted it two years before I ever saw this place. Every step we take is literally on the hopes, dreams, flesh, sorrows, fears, losses, wars, families, hunger, satiation, hopes, loves, blood, confusions — all of what makes us human — of other people. I always feel it when I’m on a trail…
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True… so true….
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Thanks Martha… scores of ancient olive trees have been destroyed in the bombing… that’s where the lines came from.
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I hate that war.
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This poem is wonderful – beautifully written, and it makes the reader think and realize some truths we need to be pondering. Really strong and powerful writing, Rajani. My prompt on wednesday is the light – this poem might work well for it?
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Thank you, Sherry. I will definitely link it to your prompt!
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Love your poem, and these are such excellent prompts. These lines especially resonated with me:
“body
after body, so small, fathers gather
them in bags just so they can do
something, anything, other than cry.” – their faces haunt me, the desolate parent unable to save their child.
“Trees so old they know
all the prequels to your shadow.” – so beautiful, I think of all those olive trees uprooted.
“Human,
write of the one tree still standing
amidst the ruins. As if, propping
up the sky.” – Beautiful.
“Write that Atlas,
here, is a small child. Atlas is
the sum of all the children.”
“There are things in
motion behind the things that
cannot move.”
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I hope and do believe in some ways that writing can make things right, especially for those who seek to censor. One must keep writing, because silence kills. As does indifference. I’m so glad you shared this poem 👌🏼
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Thank you. The images have become sadly familiar…relentless. I hope people write about what they’re witnessing. I haven’t done Napowrimo for many years… maybe the prompts will drive me to.. or inspire others.
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“Write that Atlas,here, is a small child. Atlas isthe sum of all the children.” One of many poems within this poem. Too true. Write, right?
Perhaps the earth’s silence is neither from shock at the too many dead, nor from indifference, but from the effort it takes to compel us to speak and write–to push for action and, too, to record. Earth is God who has many hands and feet and mouths among unrooted beings. This is a poem that needed writing–Thank you. Thank you, too, for the list of topics for April, a poem in itself.
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Thank you, Susan. I wasn’t sure if I would write for Napowrimo, but then I thought if I made a list, I would push myself to write and maybe others would join me. Fingers crossed.
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“Leave the silence to the earth.”
This entire post is great, but this sentence in particular, chef’s kiss.
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Thanks so much. Glad that line spoke to you.
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