Distance February 18, 2018 ~ Rajani Radhakrishnan the angle of wing to empty sky all the things I never told you Share this:TweetLike Loading...
This one is different for you. Still, it displays your talent. I like the sadness in the picture you paint here. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you Hemanth 🙂 Wish I had had one of your eagle soaring pictures to put with it! LikeLike Reply
THOUGHT PURGE 
Wow! Strikes to the heart.
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Thanks Rosemary 🙂
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So wonderful – breathtaking and beautiful. Lovely!
Anna :o]
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Thanks so much Anna 🙂
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So good. Loved the spaces you created in this small profound piece.
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Thanks so much… the cherita is a great form to work with!
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This one is different for you. Still, it displays your talent. I like the sadness in the picture you paint here.
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Thanks Myrna…
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Wow! A beautiful – and brilliant – analogy. An inspired piece of poetry!
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Thank you Wendy!
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all the things
I never
told you
Distance can be a defense and even a savior!
Hank
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Thanks Hank!
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I keep re-reading it 🙂
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Thank you… glad you liked it! 🙂
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We can never tell it all… maybe that’s why we keep the hold.
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Yes, maybe… or maybe that’s why we just let go….
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Brilliant!!!!
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Thank you Hemanth 🙂 Wish I had had one of your eagle soaring pictures to put with it!
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So perfectly and precisely parallel.
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Thanks so much Brendan.
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I like the distance between the stanzas, Rajani, and the simplicity of expression.
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Thanks Kim.. I love this form!
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You take my breath away!!!
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Thanks so much Annell.
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So simple, but that ache and intangibility is so well expressed.
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Thank you Rommy.
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thanks Sherry…
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All the things I never told you. Wow. My poem is named and is about distance too.
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Just read your poem Colleen… and that poignant note is beautiful. Thank you.
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Pungent…and deeply moving. I savor your poem’s brevity.
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Thanks so much.
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this one has me pondering and contemplating which is why I love it….
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Thanks Donna 🙂
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Beautiful! Deep thoughts in few words…so much unsaid.
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Thanks Mary 🙂
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Simple but profound, short yet deep, excellent.
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Thank you Derek.
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That is beautiful. So much said with just a few words!
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Thanks Sherri.
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WOW; a beautiful cherita. Happy Sunday Rajani
much love…
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Thanks Gillena 🙂
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Gorgeous write!💞
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂
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loosely connected with the the sharpest of angles – lovely
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Thank you Laura 🙂
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Breath-taking – less is definitely more in this instance
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Thanks Jae 🙂
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What a beautiful analogy!
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Thanks so much Sarah!
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