there is room inside the cliché,
inside the flawed ennui of existence,
to manoeuvre insecurities,
to change the pseudonym of fear,
even to mindfully colour all the little boxes
that contain your life,
unless I am explaining this all wrong;
see, a monk lets his bowl fill with rain
not to drink the redeeming sky,
but to teach the prayers that leave his lips
how to swim,
for who can tell where they have to reach
or having reached
where they must continue their journey;
not-knowing finds new clothes
in the brocaded finery of faith,
without it, naked ignorance
fights to explain its own banality,
what purpose could an unexplained life serve
in its brief coupling with a complex reality,
the unsubstantiated doubts itself,
fears the unravelling,
folds itself into tiny boxes hoping
to survive understanding;
and that purposeless becomes a tortured cliché,
burying itself in its denial,
smothering itself in disconnect,
one little air vent frothing on the surface
letting it manoeuvre,
letting it live,
letting it hope
that the prayers that leave its lips remember
how to fly.
Prayers to a beloved and a person who hurts u are two diff ones
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You blow me away.
“inside the flawed ennui of existence,
to manoeuvre insecurities,
to change the pseudonym of fear,
even to mindfully colour all the little boxes”
“a monk lets his bowl fill with rain
not to drink the redeeming sky,
but to teach the prayers that leave his lips
how to swim”
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Thank you. Much appreciated. 🙂
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A cliché often starts out being something much better, it’s by repeated it’s worn down… so I really love the thought of dissecting it and finding the core… isn’t that what poet’s do?
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It is, in their own way!!! Thanks Bjorn.
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Glorious second stanza, Rajani!
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Thank you 😀
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I love the lines:
‘see, a monk lets his bowl fill with rain
not to drink the redeeming sky,
but to teach the prayers that leave his lips
how to swim’!
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Thank you Kim 🙂
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I love the lesson of the monk and his bowl of rainwater – so profoundly expressed.
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Thanks so much Kerry.
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What a way to end this poem! Inspirational and exceptionally beautiful those last lines
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Thanks Margaret 🙂
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“see, a monk lets his bowl fill with rain
not to drink the redeeming sky,
but to teach the prayers that leave his lips
how to swim,”
Awesome!!!
much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena.
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I love the stanza about the monk and the water. The cliche is such a box, poetic metaphor gone stiff. I’m imagining it with a more than a vent, a cover I can push off.
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Thank you Colleen. I think when we lose sight of, or cannot understand the purpose of our lives, it descends into a cliche. Some measure of faith, in any direction, can be a way out of it.. though how that will come about is quite unclear.
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This. is. an. impressive. work. I love (cliché, I know) the second stanza and this “letting it live,
letting it hope
that the prayers that leave its lips remember
how to fly.” So glad I read your poem this morning.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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That second stanza is breathtaking. Wow!
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Thank you 😊
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Interesting poetic apology for cliché. Interesting, of course as euphemism, minus the import of cliché.
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Euphemism for? The poem is about faith providing a path out of banality and an individual’s futile, fearful search for purpose and answers.
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seems I misread the poem.
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🙂 the different interpretations make poetry interesting!!
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