in this churn of sky and sea and time
from whom will the mind
learn stillness?
For CDHK where we learn Basho’s ‘riddle” technique that tries not to posture as intriguing rhetoric but to trigger, like a Zen Koan, philosophical introspection. An old classic is “ “Am I a butterfly dreaming I am a man or a man dreaming I am a butterfly?”
Basho writes:
has spring come
or the year gone away?
second last day
Thought provoking ! I love it !
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Thank you Milan.
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Profoundly Zen!
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Thanks so much Carol 🙂
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You’re so welcome!!
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Beautiful haiga Thot
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Thanks so much Chèvrefeuille.
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It’s a pleasure to visit your weblog.
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Thanks so much for visiting, glad you liked it 🙂
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Very well done!!
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Thank you Janice
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Studied this one carefully – a different style than many – and when I swapped the first and second line around I also liked it. I think you should write a second on the same theme you wrote first, focusing on something very small in nature to show the explored idea – why…well, because I love your haiku/thought/ideas and was just interested to see…
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Thanks so much Hamish…let me see what I can come up with 🙂 It’s hard to keep pace with CDHK as it is!!!!!
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Oh that’s perfect!
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Thank you Kim.
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good question~
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Thanks Cindy 🙂
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