grey dawn
forever slips
a day closer
For CDHK where we learn Basho’s ‘Leap Linkage’ technique in which the writer explores his/her own truth which can only be discerned by the experienced reader.
Basho writes:
swinging bridge
lives are intertwined
in ivy vines
THOUGHT PURGE 
Sometimes we tangle. Sometimes we leap. You’ve given me something deep (or high) to think about.
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Thanks so much for stopping by Colleen.
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Wonderful. And thanks for the link to CDHK. I’m about to become an avid reader there.
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Thanks Rosemary!
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A profound and layered haiga. Beautiful … brilliant, really.
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Thanks so much Wendy!
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I admire “forever slips a day closer”. Very Basho-like!
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Thanks so much Sherry. So glad you liked it.
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I love the mystery of this. How the meaning truly lies somewhere in-between the words. Perhaps in that chasm? Buried somewhere. Wonderfully evocative and mysterious.
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Thanks Matthew…glad you liked it.
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each day brings us closer…to forever..
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Thanks Truedessa !
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Awesome!!!
have a good Sunday
much love…
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Thanks Gillena!
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Beautiful! 🙂
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Thanks ZQ!
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the monochrome adds to the mood.
lovely haiga!
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Thank you!
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You nailed it, Rajani! These simple lines open up a chasm of feeling within me, that goes all the way down to the heart of things…
Peace
Michael
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Thank you Michael… sometimes we do end up saying more with less don’t we…but other times the long winded rambling helps clear the soul!
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That grey day can be a peaceful thing, if we collect (and enjoy) all the sunny days in between.
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Possible! If we do! Thanks so much for stopping by Magaly!
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Intertwined in ivy vines – so very true!
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Eternity! Beautiful!
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Thank you..
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You’re welcome!
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We certainly can’t expect the sun to greet us every dawn but it will return one day.
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Perpetually almost there. Leaving lots to think about.
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Each day is one day less..one day more..grey..bright or otherwise…expertly crafted and love how you have merged your words into the image..
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Thanks Jae 🙂
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This is absolutely incredible..!!
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Thank you Sanaa 🙂
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very suggestive…specially the monochrome…
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Thanks Sumana!
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There is a wonderful depth in this wonderful haiga…
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Thanks so much Bjorn.
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This one makes my brain go to work!
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🙂 thanks for stopping by and reading!
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this certainly gave me much to think about
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Thanks Candy..glad you liked it.
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a shared precarious journey out over the chasm of being, perhaps the only way we can truly connect with one another. A soul shaking image.
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Thanks so much Tio…
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