I saw him on the local train during rush hour,
a newspaper cone of peanuts in his hand,
smiling at me through a web of weary limbs
and disenchanted heads,
a lesser god with a stubble and sad eyes.
Is this chance, I asked him, or fate,
or is there no difference?
he shrugged like a basement programmer
who had written a game with a million possibilities,
one thing leads to another, he said,
didn’t you want to see me?
how can I win or at least not lose,
I was begging,
five peanuts later he asked,
who decides if it is victory
or defeat?
Through the window I saw life
like a flip book,
one snapshot after the other,
each alive for a cry and a
half turn of the wheel,
each moment, each frame,
dying and born as the next,
meaning nothing by itself,
leading nowhere by itself,
he was watching me, still eating,
this is my stop, he said softly,
your station’s next.
I followed him to the exit,
we left a bird behind,
then a cloud,
then the sun,
then him,
I shrugged,
me and a square of sky for a half wheel
and the peanuts he handed me,
one thing leads to another.
Hmm, this is very interesting. Luv the images of possibilities resonate
Much love…
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thanks gillena
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I’m madly in love with this poem, and particularly ‘who decides if it is victory / or defeat?’ (And I like this god!)
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Thank you, so glad you liked it!!!
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This is brilliant. All the philosophy’s of the world coming together in a flip book that clarifies all the divergent paths into one simple truism: one thing leads to another.
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Thanks so much Wendy.
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Each moment in life is its own and all there is they say….I loved the message here especially,
‘each moment, each frame,
dying and born as the next,
meaning nothing by itself,’
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Thank you Donna 🙂
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yes, there is always a path from one thing to another – lovely poem
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Wow what a wonderful piece of writing. I love the mystery in the meeting while you still keep it very detailed and believable… Loved the peanuts.
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Thanks Bjorn… just for some context… we get a lot of peanut vendors here, especially during the season, carrying baskets of salted peanuts, selling them wrapped in newspaper… a popular snack!
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Hahaha I love a happy ending. Right on, again… holding the mystery to the end and having us to figure out the rest. I do enjoy your style 🙂
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Thanks so much… was it a happy ending? Maybe it was!
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I am struck by each frame dying and being born as the next. Wow. Loved this poem, the conversation, the peanuts…………
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Thanks Sherry…
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“Who decides if it is victory or defeat” … now there’s truly something to think about. Great write!
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Thanks so much Beverly.
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god and peanuts together – wonderful!
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Thank you Toni.
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What a delightful poem!
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Thanks Annell…
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WOW! “each frame,
dying and born as the next,
meaning nothing by itself . . . ”
The chance meeting in normal circumstances totally fits this flip book life. I’m glad, though, that the moving train is part of it, as we are alive and moving between the impressions and the memories and the times we must cry out our what and why and “how can I win or at least not lose?”
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Thanks Susan… this is the third one I wrote in what I call the monologues with god series… glad you liked this one.
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Sometimes – all one can say is WOW! this is one such time… especially love the existentially open ending “one thing leads to another.” Brilliant piece of writing and thinking.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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What better place to meet a lesser god than on the morning local? 😉
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Absolutely 🙂
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Ah, sometimes one doesn’t know where those encounters on a local train will lead. A fascinating ethereal snapshot of such a time!
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Thanks Mary…
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Beautiful, Rajani. Your words always take flight. Love this 🙂
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Ryan, you are too kind! Thank you so much.
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This is beautifully evocative!💘 Especially love; “Is this chance, I asked him, or fate, or is there no difference? he shrugged like a basement programmer who had written a game with a million possibilities, one thing leads to another, he said, didn’t you want to see me? how can I win or at least not lose, I was begging, five peanuts later he asked, who decides if it is victory or defeat?”💘
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Thank you Sanaa 🙂
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That it does – the last verse was my favourite in this sweet treat of a poem
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Thanks so much Jae.
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Very good piece of writing, I especially enjoyed your 2nd stanza with its questions, possibilities and answer. Clever how the answer is in the form of a question. ……who decides if it is victory
or defeat?……….
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Thanks so much Julian.. am so glad you specially picked that part…
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We’re in the same place with scenes changing every second as it were…love that ‘god’ in the title with a small ‘g’ & basement programmer image.
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Thanks Sumana…
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Reblogged this on Sarah Russell Poetry and commented:
I want to share Rajani Radhakrishnan’s gentle poem about life and god and how. . . well, how one thing leads to another.
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Rajani, this is a beautiful commentary on life and god and peanuts too. Yes, life is one thing leading to another, isn’t it. I would love to reblog, if that’s OK.
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Thanks so much Sarah 🙂 Of course am delighted that you want to share this on your blog.
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Thank you for this fascinating poem
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Thanks so much, glad you liked it.
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