this poem is a secret,
that will splinter into a thousand untruths,
as it leaves your open lips,
bloodied and screaming,
the salt acrid around your tongue
like a guilty sea;
this poem is a secret,
that will scatter into a hidden light,
as you read its thoughts,
new words falling in cursive shadows,
convulsing strangely
upon its crumpled sheets;
why are we here.
why are we still here.
this poem is the secret
chanted into an ignorant ear,
smelling of the heaving desert air,
of the sigh of a lone date palm,
of the shifting knife-edged dunes,
a drop of vermilion blood
whirling for a moment
in a riptide of infinitude;
this poem is the secret
that fell from frozen fingers,
with the silence of the clouds after the rain,
with the absence of the sky in the haze,
a mirage folded along an unseen crease,
the inevitable cause,
the unresolved effect;
here.
still here.
We each have our secrets, some of them hidden from ourselves, as we ignore them and lie to ourselves. What tangled webs we weave when we start lying to others to conceal these secrets… Nicely penned.
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Thank you Jammy.
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Robust!
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Thank you.
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This is so so beautiful, thotpurge! Engaging images…Wonderful work, as always!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful construction and emotions pain through out.
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Thank you 🙂
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oh this is just delicious!!! luv the form you chose for this one.
much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena.
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Secrets are a part of wisdom! Beautiful!
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Thank you Carol 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Very interesting , esp “with the silence of the clouds after the rain” – well done!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Your images here are wonderful and you have wrapped them into a powerful piece of writing–a gift to read!
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Thank you Audrey 🙂
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I thought I left a lengthy comment, but cannot find it. This is my new favorite of yours. I spoke of “cursive shadows” and the smell of “heaving desert air” and “the riptide of infinitude” among other unique images that rock the motif. How the secret is found and lost again. Still.
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Sorry Susan, because I have comment moderation on, comments don’t appear immediately. Plus with the time difference, am only looking at the comments now (7AM here) Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Intense and moving.
I loved it: “a mirage folded along an unseen crease,/the inevitable cause,/the unresolved effect”.
-HA
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Thank you Anmol..
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I agree with Jae – this poem is brilliant. You have woven something so beautiful. To me the questions are sometimes as important as the answers and here you’ve addressed a major question. “Why are we here?” I think you are here, to write poetry like this. And to help the rest of us try to discern.
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That’s very kind Myrna, thank you so much. Glad you liked the poem.
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I love that “here. still here”. You use wonderful imagery in your poems, the words swirl most wonderfully as I read………
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Thanks so much Sherry 🙂
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I love the image of hidden light and strangely convulsing new words…..
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Thank you Sumana..
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This. This is the alchemy. My heart aches. It is my new favorite of yours. Oh my! These images and more: “cursive shadows” the smell of “heaving desert air” “sigh of a lone date palm” “riptide of infinitude.” And the entire finale. Yes. Still.
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Thanks so much Susan for the kind words..am very glad you liked this one!
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Such powerful opening lines! Especially love “with the silence of the clouds after the rain, with the absence of the sky in the haze..” Beautifully penned (as always) 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thank you Sanaa. 🙂
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Very glad that she is still here.. telling a secret to an ignorant ear is perhaps worse than not telling it at all..also love the play with the sheets of paper and picturing her tangled and sore in bedsheets..this poem is brilliant 😉
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Thanks so much Jae.
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What some beautiful images you created here for a fine read.
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Thanks so much Robin.
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To let the secret out at kosher times is topmost on the poem’s resume. Take that out and the poem is out of a job, the poet and muse twiddling thumbs.
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If the eye be discerning, a secret lurks under every line and every pause is kosher! 🙂
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🙂
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Very moving!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Very welcome. 😉
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