Wait long enough
and faces morph
into shadows,
shadows stretch into
blurry shapes,
spongy black,
as if the entire void
fell into your eyes
while you were
sleeping.
Wait long enough
and voices drown
in whispers,
whispers freeze
into sheets
of white,
shrouds
for every
silent word
that you were
screaming.
Wait long enough
and smiles tiptoe
into arcs of pain,
pain dances
in the opaque fog,
you can’t remember
what it felt like,
the golden sun,
before it started
raining.
The value of something or someone is only realized once they’re gone. Sometimes the waiting may end the joy to sadness. Thank you for the poem!
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Thank you Kelvin 🙂
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A sad commentary on life–waiting for the negative, the pain–and yet there are those who spend their lives anticipating such an end. Emotional write, well conceived and executed.
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Thank you.
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I like everything about this…the repetition of “wait long enough” is so ominous but realistic. So many creative images…..”smiles tiptoe into arcs of pain”…wow!
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Thanks so much, appreciate your response greatly.
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I decided early on that my favorite part of this poem was going to be:
“as if the entire void
fell into your eyes
while you were
sleeping.”
But the whole is so much more than this one part. Very nice. Peace, Linda
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Thanks so much Linda, glad you enjoyed it.
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Ah.. path to dark.. spiraling filling down
threads light in dark.. stairway
hell.. slow drift black..
corners numb
where eyes
no longer
sing
light..
Oh..
passage out..
seeds of light
root true in darkest
nights.. where light blooms
in darkest cocoons of butterfly wings..
to delight again flight living.. well flown truth..:)
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I feel like the spiral is a downward one here… very intense
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Thanks so much Bill, appreciate your comment.
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Opportunity is always there. Wait long enough and there it comes. However mindful though if it’s too long one gets the crumbs. Nicely Thot!
Hank
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Thank you 🙂
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Poignant and quite lovely.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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The progression of sinking, the word choices of blackness ice and shrouds. Like being buried alive, you depict the loss so well.
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Thank you Björn 🙂
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the repetition of the line just moves this along all the levels…and that silent screams but….I like to think wait long enough and you will remember the sun.
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Thank you 🙂 Yes, it’s good to remain positive!!! 🙂
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maybe the key is in not waiting but trying to work on things so that it won’t happen… i’m a certified rain fighter – ha – at least i do my best – not always successful though…
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Totally agree… but for those times when things are stupidly stubborn, there’s always a poem 🙂 Thank you Claudia.
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this is just lovely and full of emotion
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Thank you Candy 🙂
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Wait long enough and something bad is bound to happen…this one is heavy with sadness.
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Thank you Lynn, appreciate your comment.
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Wait long enough & your poem will become magnificent, the prompt will be rocked to its socks, & accolades will be served up by your peers–this is one of those times.
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Thank you Glenn ..appreciate your comment greatly 🙂
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This is such a great line:
“smiles tiptoe
into arcs of pain”
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Thank you whimsygizmo 🙂
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I felt the sinking into the world of shadows, sheets of white, and arcs of pain ~ How sad if we don’t remember the golden sun ~ The refrain of wait long enough, made me think it is constantly happening, the loss of those memories ~
Thanks for linking up with D’verse ~
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Thanks so much Grace 🙂
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Yes, if you wait long enough who knows what will happen? The repetition worked.
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Thank you Mary 🙂
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Sheesh. This is incredible.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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The silent screams stanza is the one the jumped out at me first. It is always the things we hold in. There is truth in that last stanza though on how our sorrows turn to joys.
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Or joys to sorrows! Thank you so much for reading!
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you’ve made my day with this marvelous parade of words and march of phrase. Super Wow!
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Thanks for your very kind words. Am so glad you enjoyed it!
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