Beyond this wall of grey, what if there is another
sky, in which a lone bird rises and the light, the
enduring light, refuses to cast its shadow. You erase
the bird, you deny the light, you mock the sky. But
can you feel the wings breaking through your skin?
That pain is relief, is proof of life. See the blood pooling
around your feet, look again, look up, whatever held
you to this ground has left your arms a long time ago.
The sentence has shrunk into a word at the tip of your
tongue. Say it, drain the sorrow from your bones. Fly.
Rereading this verse only adds into its sublime beauty, from the reassuring image of those wings breaking to that last exhortation to fly. 🙂
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Thank you, always heartwarming when someone comes back to read your work. Especially in times like these!
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“Beyong this wall of grey, a light”. We all need to believe that, and we need to believe we can FLY!
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Thank you, Beverly. Yes perhaps, we do!
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There are times in our lives when we are rooted to a spot, to a person, a place, a situation. But, when that purpose is no more – we must ask ourselves – are we still in the right spot? Many never ask themselves and stay put. The fortunate ones do, and if need be, transplant themselves in better light where they sprout anew 🙂
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Yes, absolutely. Sometimes we don’t realize we are still waiting … or lost. Thanks so much, Margaret.
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And that ‘fly’ means a lot…great lines!
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Thank you, Sreeja.
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Even though this poem ends with the exhortation to fly, I am left with a feeling of abject hopelessness…
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Oh dear… but I can understand.. I needed to write this to egg myself on, so some of that darkness must have rubbed off!
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I like the defiant tone in this piece, and how it doesn’t deny the pain of rising above, but leans into it as just part of the process.
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Thanks so much, Rommy… that’s a lovely look at the poem.
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Oh, I needed that ending!
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Thanks so much, Colleen.
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in such moments of angst, perhaps the only thought left is to flee. you paint a dark poem (loved the imagery) but there is hope at the end.
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Thanks so much!
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The Greeks were telling stories about Icarus who made wings to fly thousands of years ago and look what happened to him. It is bad enough flying in a jet plane! (P.S. I think I am getting old)
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🙂 Think of it as a metaphor….
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Wow amazing poem
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Thanks so much, Marja.
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This poem is delicate and hopeful, Rajani, and full of light, which you achieve through repetition and bird imagery. I love the encouragement to ‘break through the wall of grey’ and the way the poem ends with one word, the imperative ‘Fly’.
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Thanks so much, Kim… this was difficult to write, so am glad it worked!
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I find it very encouraging and yes we we should not let anything tie us down.
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Thanks, Vandana.
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Flight is only possible with an uplift, which you have deftly provided for us here. Thank you.
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Thanks so much, Ron for your kind comment.
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This exquisitely-crafted poem is utterly persuasive. I see the ‘what if’; I feel my shoulders stretch; and in answer to the final word, I want to yell, ‘Yes!’ and soar.
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Thank you, Rosemary. Am so glad it works… I think I wrote it when I needed a bit of convincing, myself!
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Your powerful poem reminds me of the words in a popular song, “like stars across the sky, we were born to fly.” I wish you well.
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Thanks so much, Tio Stib!
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