But the earth unrolled is wider than this patch of
sky – what is the point of an infinite universe that
won’t fit in your eyes? See, the moon is only peering
through a window — what a lot of fuss over a curious
voyeur. What we cannot do, gods will. What we
should not do, gods must. There are things you can
debate with the gods at 3 AM — the density of
darkness, the subtraction of life, why the physics that
keeps the moon afloat cannot balance a heart. Gods
are loose-tongued at that hour, they will confess light is
trickery, that what you see, you don’t. But talk quickly,
at the stroke of dawn, the last god turns into a sun.
At 3:00 AM fantastic thoughts abound, lost by dawn. Wonderful poem!
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Thank you, Sara.
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I love this poem of gods and pondering. Beautiful
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Thank you, Susie.
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This feels like an entire story, condensed and yet immediately understandable, speeding briefly by. It’s beautiful.
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Thanks so much.
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Aha! At last someone who understands that what to do when you find yourself awake at 3am is to be inspired by the moon, commune with the gods, and make poetry! Beautifully articulated.
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🙂 Thank you, Rosemary!
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Ah, the things we can debate at 3 a.m. You’ve captured it well.
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Thanks so much, Beverly.
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I really like the cleverness and reality of the last stanza. The advice for living, mixed in with the myth, brews so many images in the mind. Also, I always enjoy a poem that does what it says: the wordplay showing us how easy it is to miss that we aren’t seeing when we think we see.
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Thanks so much, Magaly… this extended lockdown has directed thoughts to existential questions… everyone seems to be contemplating life in so many ways!
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At least you can get the gods to talk to you (silence is what I usually get), even if their answers are hard to understand and not terribly satisfying.
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Maybe silence is one of the ways the universe communicates 🙂 The best questions are rhetorical anyway!!!
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awww…this was beautiful. the lines and content are just stunning.
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Many thanks. Much appreciated!
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Night-owl gods are rather unfair to those of us who are rubbish after 10 pm. But there is always a price to pay when meeting them, whether you greet them at the front or back end of the night.
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Oh yes, insomnia for starters!!! 🙂 Thanks so much, Rommy!
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The first lines blogged my mind.. what is the point of an infinite universe that won’t fit into your eyes? What indeed!
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Thank you, Namratha.
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Love this especially; “what is the point of an infinite universe that won’t fit in your eyes?” 💝
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Thanks so much, Sanaa.
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Love this especially the presence of the the gods at night and my favourite lines are”But the earth unrolled is wider than this patch of sky ” and “why the physics that keeps the moon afloat cannot balance a heart”
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Thank you, Marja. Glad you liked it!
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I’m often awake around 3 am, Rajani, so your poem resonated with me, and I agree, there are things you can debate with the gods, particularly ’why the physics that / keeps the moon afloat cannot balance a heart’. I love the ending of this poem!
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Thanks so much, Kim. 3 AM is an odd time and has the most unlikely thoughts for me… nowadays with the monsoon it’s full of the sound of rain. Hope your 3AMs are better and more productive!
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I love the existential question about the physics that cannot balance a heart. This will be fun to read if I can’t sleep- I might actually start a spiritual debate! Love it.
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Of course the Sun was and still is a God (sent) we wouldn’t be here otherwise; we would be somewhere very cold indeed!
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Indeed!
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Moon indeed is a curious voyeur, and I like how at the stroke of dawn the last god turns into a sun. Wonderful!
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Thanks so much, Madhuri 🙂
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Mind wrestling in words , 👍🏼
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Thank you… 🙂
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This is gorgeous. I love the moon peering in the window. And the last god turning into a sun.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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