A story is a room, with windows that let the outside in, with
corners in which to hide, with a place for the past, even for
seven variations of the present β time splitting into rainbow
hues, each coloured arch bending towards a different end.
But love cannot fit in a room the way it can in a poem. A
poem is a shining eye. A small object. A distant star. A cup
of tea. A raindrop sliding off a leaf. A single drumbeat.
Everything I have to say is held in its tiny fist. There is no
breadth, no depth, no curve to tell you why or when. No
space for reasons, for questions. I see your room, rich with
pronouns trimmed in brocade and velour. I know that kind
of love that has Persian carpets and antique lamps from the
souk. I bring only a blue marble. A swatch of sky. My poem is
a little box of wood. How many are already lost in your room?
What a beautifully intruguing poem which such great descriptions.
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Thank you Robin.
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The ending caught me, the overstuffed room being more emotional than expected. π Lovely.
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Thanks so much π
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Through your “window” a, gust of wind, dust and birdsong, all wonderful elements to craft the space within
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena.
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An amazing poem! I’ll take your little box of wood over the room crammed with treasures any day.
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Thank you, magic π
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Perfect. Every word.
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Thanks so much, Sumana.
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Wow! You make me understand why I am a poet. Of course! Whereas I have both two eye-windows and two hand-fists, I’m near-sighted and night blind. It’s with the hands that I reach even into the darkest space. Wow. I’ve never read a more vivid comparison of the two!
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Thanks so much, Susan. π
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I’m persuaded!
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π Thanks Rosemary.
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So many beautiful ‘a poem is’ here that I can’t quote just one. Just when I think you’ve come up with the ultimate, you give me a new one. Whew!
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Thanks so much π
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My goodness this is beautiful…too many favorite lines to post all of them
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Thanks so much, Susie.
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Great use of creative metaphors of what a poem is!
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Thank you π
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I love your vision of a poem, beautifulβ£οΈ
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Thanks so much!
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I love how you describe the poetry… part of your poem makes me think of Gertrude Stein’s writing in the best of ways…
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I must check out her poems- ! Thanks, Bjorn.
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I love this poem so much. I wish I had written it. It is Perfect! The poem holding everything you have to say in its tiny fist. Wonderful.
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Thanks so much, Sherry.
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“But love cannot fit in a room the way a poem can”- this is so beautiful and profound.
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Thanks Linda.
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I bring only a blue marble. A swatch of sky.
Just perfection!
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Thank you, Kerry.
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Ooh, what a wondrous write! I am still navigating through this room with its windows and coloured ends while mapping the image of that distant star or the raindrop sliding off the leaf. This is perfectly said: “Everything I have to say is held in its tiny fist. There is no/breadth, no depth, no curve to tell you why or when.”
Such a rich and evocative verse. I am definitely going to come back and observe this “little box of wood” again. π
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Thanks so much, Anmol.
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Poetry is all of that. I hate to think how many are lost in a box, under a bed, in the back of a cluttered mind, in the four walls of my writing room.
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Thank you, Yvonne.
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Nice. language and storytelling as metaphor for space
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Thank you, Larry.
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People who read and love poetry however will bring their own tea, brewed from their own perspective, to fill that cup. Depending on the reader that cup may have a blend of exotic pasts, presents, and futures as nuanced as every object in the room.
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Indeed, the reader does bring his own life experiences into the experience. The more honest the poet is, the greater the resonance across a wider spectrum.
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“But love cannot fit in a room the way it can in a poem,” sigh … this is beautiful! β€οΈ
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Thanks so much, Sanaa.
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Your poem really hit the spot, Rajani! I especially like windows that let the outside in and corners in which to hide – thatβs how writing is to me at the moment. I love the lines:
βBut love cannot fit in a room the way it can in a poem. A
poem is a shining eye. A small object. A distant star. A cup
of tea. A raindrop sliding off a leaf. A single drumbeat.β
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Thanks so much, Kim. I think the necessary brevity of poetry forces a certain kind of directness and honesty that makes poems special.
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Exquisite!
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Thanks so much, TioStib.
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