#3
The moon brings its fullness to fit
into the small of your eye. To blink
would be sacrilege. Would be to
count its failings. Is there a greater
love, a higher love? To seek love is
blasphemy. Your job is just to be.
#3
The moon brings its fullness to fit
into the small of your eye. To blink
would be sacrilege. Would be to
count its failings. Is there a greater
love, a higher love? To seek love is
blasphemy. Your job is just to be.
… the moon… into the small of your eye… wow Stunning
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Thanks so much 🙂
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“Your job is just to be” love that and how the moon brings its fullness to fit in the small of your eye..
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Thank you, Susie.
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These compact six lines capture so much — I am enthralled by the idea that to seek love is blasphemy in this environ and picture. I so appreciate the Ravi Varma pairing here as well.
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Thanks Anmol… it is an inspiration from an interpretation of perhaps a translation…so it left Tao behind long ago. But yes, love can’t be forced, can it? It comes when it comes..or not.
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Lovely and romantic,,,
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Thank you 🙂
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What can I say to this, except, ‘Yes, yes, yes.’
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🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank you!
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A gorgeous ode to inner peace.
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Thanks so much, Kerry.
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It is amazing to me how much profundity can be packed into so few lines.
That is so stress-relieving to me — to read that it’s okay to just be.
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Thanks so much. Am glad it resonated.
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The moon brings its fullness to fit
into the small of your eye….what an amazing line this is. It is romantic without being effusive.
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Thanks so much, Toni.
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“To blink would be sacrilege,” oh that is such a passionate thought.. a brilliant image! Thank you so much for this beautiful poem, Rajani! ❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa. Am doing this series as an exercise while editing my manuscript in fits and starts.. so am really glad it worked!!
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A startling image, Rajani, the moon at the mercy of a blink of an eye.
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Thank you, Toni.
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Very nice
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Thank you 🙂
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You capture our fascination and inner seeking of the moon and all of her manifestations. Thanks for the visit…
Elizabeth
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Thank you, Elizabeth.
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