There must be many gods up there, yours, mine, the god
of unbelievers. Used to be easier. All people wanted was
to be safe from life, from death, from gods. Now infinite
prayers litter the space between lips and stars. But
prayers are not gods. They need feathers and hollow
bones and ways to breathe. And ways to survive till they
find the right god. The skies are crowded like the
vegetable market on Sunday morning. We slithered and
jostled through curses and shoulders and sweat to find
the best mangoes. It was the lunar new year. We prayed
for twelve months of happiness. We got two. That prayer
must have broken a wing or run out of air or died in a
stampede of buoyant yearnings. Maybe you were saying
something that day. Maybe I couldn’t hear in the din.
Even gods can’t hear in the Sunday market with every
single person crying out for something. Used to be easier.
Image by NASA (Picture prompt provided by Visual Verse)
First published on Visual Verse (Vol 06, Chapter 5)
Who is this God being anyway?
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That is a question only faith can answer!
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lovely, thoughtful piece of writing.
i can relate to this with my lunar new year. after asking for twelve good months in the morning, we were jostling with the crowds in the evening on new year’s eve. 🙂
i think it is an excellent response to the prompt.
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Thanks so much.
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I love this, all those littered prayers and ones with broken wings.So much to think about.
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Thanks so much, Colleen.
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Lovely writing that leaves you thinking about all that we wish and pray for and yes how it used to be easier.
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Thanks so much, Myrna.
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I like this very much. It is very thoughtfully developed and, in turn, it elicits a thoughtful response, at its reading.
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Thanks so much, Wendy.
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WOW! You nailed it eloquently. Oh, yes, I agree.
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Thank you 🙂
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I wonder too… prayers that a god will never hear… sometimes I think that prayers are changing to pleas for mercy.
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The need to, I think, with the way the earth is going! Thanks Bjorn.
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The trouble with “used to be” is that “what is now” is all we have! 😉
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True that!
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Visceral experience of crowding and prayers and a lasting image of regret.
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Thanks so much.
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Gorgeously haunting imagery.
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Thanks so much, Rommy.
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This is incredibly potent, Rajani! ❤️
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Thanks, Sanaa.
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Progress and delopment doas have its setbacks too as we we extend our live to overcrowd the planet. We make life easier by but endanger the future of the planet with greed and destruction. Pity we didn’t have a workable plan!
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I agree… we let it go to ruin and now it has us!
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This thought-provoking poem, it seems to me, might fit Bjorn’s prompt at Real Toads…..go take a peek. I especially relate to asking for twelve months of happiness and getting two. And the sky crowded with stars and the broken-winged dream. Wonderful writing!
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Thanks Sherry…. Am so glad this poem resonated with so many!
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It’s true, Rajani, it did use to be easier. The lines that particularly spoke to me are:
‘prayers are not gods. They need feathers and hollow
bones and ways to breathe. And ways to survive till they
find the right god’
and
‘Even gods can’t hear in the Sunday market with every
single person crying out for something’
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Thank you, Kim.
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I love this one too. Such vivid images you create with your words. The sad fate of the prayers is an unexpected effect of over-population! I like that personal touch of poignancy, too, within the picture of crowded chaos.
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Thanks so much, Rosemary.
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Love this one, Rajani!
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Thank you, Sarah. Love the prompts at Visual Verse…
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