Used to be easier

There must be many gods up there, yours, mine, the god
of unbelievers. Used to be easier. All people wanted was

to be safe from life, from death, from gods. Now infinite
prayers litter the space between lips and stars. But

prayers are not gods. They need feathers and hollow
bones and ways to breathe. And ways to survive till they

find the right god. The skies are crowded like the
vegetable market on Sunday morning. We slithered and

jostled through curses and shoulders and sweat to find
the best mangoes. It was the lunar new year. We prayed

for twelve months of happiness. We got two. That prayer
must have broken a wing or run out of air or died in a

stampede of buoyant yearnings. Maybe you were saying
something that day. Maybe I couldn’t hear in the din.

Even gods can’t hear in the Sunday market with every
single person crying out for something. Used to be easier.

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Image by NASA (Picture prompt provided by Visual Verse)
First published on Visual Verse (Vol 06, Chapter 5)

32 thoughts on “Used to be easier

  1. lovely, thoughtful piece of writing.
    i can relate to this with my lunar new year. after asking for twelve good months in the morning, we were jostling with the crowds in the evening on new year’s eve. 🙂
    i think it is an excellent response to the prompt.

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  2. I like this very much. It is very thoughtfully developed and, in turn, it elicits a thoughtful response, at its reading.

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  3. Progress and delopment doas have its setbacks too as we we extend our live to overcrowd the planet. We make life easier by but endanger the future of the planet with greed and destruction. Pity we didn’t have a workable plan!

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  4. This thought-provoking poem, it seems to me, might fit Bjorn’s prompt at Real Toads…..go take a peek. I especially relate to asking for twelve months of happiness and getting two. And the sky crowded with stars and the broken-winged dream. Wonderful writing!

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  5. It’s true, Rajani, it did use to be easier. The lines that particularly spoke to me are:
    ‘prayers are not gods. They need feathers and hollow
    bones and ways to breathe. And ways to survive till they
    find the right god’
    and
    ‘Even gods can’t hear in the Sunday market with every
    single person crying out for something’

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  6. I love this one too. Such vivid images you create with your words. The sad fate of the prayers is an unexpected effect of over-population! I like that personal touch of poignancy, too, within the picture of crowded chaos.

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