It is the measure of incongruence, the horizon askew,
the wind running amok, the sullen moon a flushed
pink, the world at war with its children, dead in school
yards, drowned in thirsty seas, broken under the rubble
of endless hate. I see you flinch as you read the headline,
another five year old raped and dumped on the side of
the road; a curious fly slips in through the screen door and
surveys the remains of a chocolate muffin as the silence
seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin.
A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten
in the morning sun; it would make sense, it would all make
sense if the earth had succumbed and spun astray, a flaccid
ball untethered from its orbit, or if all of creation, swathed
in mournful black was biting down on the last trees to stop
itself from screaming. I hear you start the car, I hear it
cough, again, again, as if our air is too toxic to breathe in.
First published on Visual Verse (Vol 05, Chapter 05)
Click on the link to see their picture prompt.
It feels as if the world should stop and acknowledge and just disintegrate with the evil that occurs – the fact it goes on and sometimes forgets – if it were my child I’d not be able to comprehend…
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Thanks Margaret.
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I wonder how long before the earth will stop spinning? Will we cause it, or will something come and hit us? Will the earth itself blow up some day or do something like it did to the dinosaurs to us?
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Thanks Bekkie…
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And suprisingly the earth keeps spinning and the sun continues to rise and people go about their lives like there is something to be grateful about
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True… thanks so much Namratha..
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I wonder how history will write about our current events, the things we’ve cause, ignored… It all seems so heavy, but I do get glimpses of hope some days. A painful, realistic piece of life written with such visuals I would call it Poetic Realism.
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Thanks so much Susie… yes one is hopeful watching the next generation stand up for what we didn’t but there is too much that is wrong sadly…
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kaykuala
I hear you start the car, I hear it
cough, again, again, as if our air
is too toxic to breathe in
One forever wants to get away from it all. Just too much of a bother
Hank
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True. Thank you Hank.
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Wuper poem Rajani. The as if…it always amazes me how the world keeps turning, the sun still rises and sets, life goes on in spite of our sorrow.
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So true…thanks Toni.
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This is a poem of our world today. It amazes me that everything around us doesn’t just
burn, and turn to black ash.
The images of the fly picking at the skeleton of a muffin, and the car at the end were as powerful as a scream. So well written.
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Thanks so much Sara. The picture prompt was quite a thought provoker!!
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There is a scream between the five year old and the fly–an in-congruence that hits me hard even after drowning in thirst. Oh, I agree! Some days it makes no sense to me that the earth still spins in place despite the helter skelter. Your last line slays me. Wow!
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Thanks so much Susan.
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“the world at war with its children” , I too share this despair. A poignant write!
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Thank you Khaya.
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This poem says everything I feel about the state of the world at the moment. The bird’s forgotten song, the car coughing, our air too toxic to breathe in……….I so admire and resonate with your words, Rajani. This poem tells it like it is. A world askew. How do we help it regain its balance? Or has it gone too far astray? Today students are marching for safe classrooms. Their government will not hear them. Horrible.
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Askew. Astray… seems that way Sherry… maybe we can’t correct it after all. Sadly. Wish it were otherwise.
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I think for me your dreadest, darkest lines are
“A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten”
This is a place for a scream. Even if silent in my case
A magnificent craft of images Rajani
Much🌼love
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Thanks so much Gillena.
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You are captured some wonderful thoughts about the world… “as the silence
seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin.
A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten”
Your words seeped into the bones of my body…I love this.
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Thanks so much Annell…
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Such vivid imagery in this dystopia we call life. And life just goes on….
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Thanks Vivian…
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Sadly this world is our own creation and we’re enmeshed in it. Its destiny is our destiny. Sigh. A beautiful and powerful write, as always.
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True Sumana, by being silent we are just as culpable perhaps. Thanks so much.
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There is too much profit made from making war and abetting civil unrest. We may think it is just foreign countries at war with themselves but ask who is supplying arms to make it happen and making a profit for themselves.
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The worst breed of human is the one that makes arms for profit… despicable. Totally agree, Robin.
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This is my kind of landscape, Rajani:
‘…the horizon askew,
the wind running amok, the sullen moon a flushed / pink’
and then you remind me that the world is at war with its children and my heart sinks. It’s strange that I tend to forget the tragedies and yes I flinch as I read the terrible headlines. I love the lines:
‘a curious fly slips in through the screen door and
surveys the remains of a chocolate muffin as the silence
seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin’
but mine usually does.
Thank you for reminding me..
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Thanks so much Kim…
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Wow! What a brilliant use of that prompt. And I particularly like the ironic “As if” in the last line. (Perhaps it won’t be very long.) I too share your despair. Yet I think, in the face of it all, we must keep doing what we can – which, sometimes (one of the things) is to write poems.
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Which, sometimes is to write poems! Agree! Thanks Rosemary 🙂
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I hear you Thotpurge. It does seem that the world should take notice to the craziness of the times. A powerful and timely write indeed!!
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Thanks so much Carrie.
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I love the way you bring it back to the personal at the end.
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Thank you 🙂
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You perfectly captured the current situation around us . The closing lines so painfully true…
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Thanks Neeraj.
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You believe that the world would stop at all disasters… that the earth would shrug its fleece and get rid of human lice… like an old dog finally having too much parasites… yet the sun rises and all seems normal every day.
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human lice is accurate … well said Bjorn…what a destructive species we are!
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It almost feels like an affront, to have the world go on placidly while horrors happen.
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Yes, every single time you read about something terrible that happened, you wonder how the world is just going about its thing…. Thanks so much Rommy.
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You are a mistress of imagery. The glimpse of the devastated children stays so terribly bright in the mind, and that car… what a surreal punch in the gut.
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Thanks so much Magaly.
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Such a poignant and timely write! I too wish the world could be a better place.
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂
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It matters. That is why I give myself to someone who knows all, who can reach all. To ourselves we are solitude. It matters. And we matter, all of us, beyond our own comprehension.
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Thanks so much Tammy. This comment landed in the spam folder, so I just recovered it. Apologies. We must matter, this must make sense..otherwise it would be so depressingly pointless. So agree!
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I share your despondency – I wish I didn’t.
Anna
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Oh yes, it could all be a whole lot better! Thanks so much 🙂
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yet still the flowers bloom, the hummingbirds feed, the moon floats above and delights the silent sea.
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and the mundane and the banal everyday things just keep carrying on as well, as if nothing matters.
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