Incongruence

It is the measure of incongruence, the horizon askew,
the wind running amok, the sullen moon a flushed

pink, the world at war with its children, dead in school
yards, drowned in thirsty seas, broken under the rubble

of endless hate. I see you flinch as you read the headline,
another five year old raped and dumped on the side of

the road; a curious fly slips in through the screen door and
surveys the remains of a chocolate muffin as the silence

seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin.
A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten

in the morning sun; it would make sense, it would all make
sense if the earth had succumbed and spun astray, a flaccid

ball untethered from its orbit, or if all of creation, swathed
in mournful black was biting down on the last trees to stop

itself from screaming. I hear you start the car, I hear it
cough, again, again, as if our air is too toxic to breathe in.

 

First published on Visual Verse (Vol 05, Chapter 05)
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54 thoughts on “Incongruence

  1. I wonder how long before the earth will stop spinning? Will we cause it, or will something come and hit us? Will the earth itself blow up some day or do something like it did to the dinosaurs to us?

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  2. kaykuala

    I hear you start the car, I hear it
    cough, again, again, as if our air
    is too toxic to breathe in

    One forever wants to get away from it all. Just too much of a bother

    Hank

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  3. This is a poem of our world today. It amazes me that everything around us doesn’t just
    burn, and turn to black ash.
    The images of the fly picking at the skeleton of a muffin, and the car at the end were as powerful as a scream. So well written.

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  4. There is a scream between the five year old and the fly–an in-congruence that hits me hard even after drowning in thirst. Oh, I agree! Some days it makes no sense to me that the earth still spins in place despite the helter skelter. Your last line slays me. Wow!

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  5. This poem says everything I feel about the state of the world at the moment. The bird’s forgotten song, the car coughing, our air too toxic to breathe in……….I so admire and resonate with your words, Rajani. This poem tells it like it is. A world askew. How do we help it regain its balance? Or has it gone too far astray? Today students are marching for safe classrooms. Their government will not hear them. Horrible.

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  6. I think for me your dreadest, darkest lines are
    “A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten”

    This is a place for a scream. Even if silent in my case

    A magnificent craft of images Rajani

    Much🌼love

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  7. You are captured some wonderful thoughts about the world… “as the silence
    seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin.
    A nameless bird looks out, the words to its song forgotten”

    Your words seeped into the bones of my body…I love this.

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  8. There is too much profit made from making war and abetting civil unrest. We may think it is just foreign countries at war with themselves but ask who is supplying arms to make it happen and making a profit for themselves.

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  9. This is my kind of landscape, Rajani:
    ‘…the horizon askew,
    the wind running amok, the sullen moon a flushed / pink’
    and then you remind me that the world is at war with its children and my heart sinks. It’s strange that I tend to forget the tragedies and yes I flinch as I read the terrible headlines. I love the lines:
    ‘a curious fly slips in through the screen door and
    surveys the remains of a chocolate muffin as the silence
    seeps into the bones of another day that will not begin’
    but mine usually does.
    Thank you for reminding me..

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  10. Wow! What a brilliant use of that prompt. And I particularly like the ironic “As if” in the last line. (Perhaps it won’t be very long.) I too share your despair. Yet I think, in the face of it all, we must keep doing what we can – which, sometimes (one of the things) is to write poems.

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  11. It matters. That is why I give myself to someone who knows all, who can reach all. To ourselves we are solitude. It matters. And we matter, all of us, beyond our own comprehension.

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    1. Thanks so much Tammy. This comment landed in the spam folder, so I just recovered it. Apologies. We must matter, this must make sense..otherwise it would be so depressingly pointless. So agree!

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