Beating against a door that
will not open,
a portal to the other side,
where gardens are watered
with moondance and wine
and truth blossoms like roses,
heady and coloured by sunsets,
again and again,Â
pounding the door with tears and cries and
fists that bleed,
and yet when I wake, I stand
on the other side,
holding shut the door that
will not open,
pounded by fears and lies
and fists that drip
with wine,
bloody and coloured by sunsets,
again and again.
Truly, the grass grows greener…on the other side of the door!
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Thanks Frank… 🙂
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Thanks Frank 🙂
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Yes, the oft paradox of the hope of fulfilled dreams and the (sometimes) awful reality of when they are realised.
As always, a wonderful write Rajani.
Anna :o]
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I recognise that nightmare of knocking on a door, Rajani, you’ve conveyed it so well with the bleeding, dripping fists.
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Thanks so much Kim.
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We don’t always like where we end up!
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That’s true! Thanks Bekkie.
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Interesting how we are trying to open the same doors that we also hold close from the other side.
I’d like to go where
“where gardens are watered
with moondance and wine”
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Thanks Rob.
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If only we could hold the door shut indefinitely, holding out the terror and lies. If only we learned the way to empowerment. You see, we know what is possible! Always. I feel a sharp heart pain, so moved.
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We do know what is possible.. we just don’t accept what is not. Thank you so much Susan.
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The sense of desperation is so thick in this one. I can hear the pounding, the screaming, the horror of being kept out and then not let out.
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Thank you Magaly!
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Oh my. Felt pain there in the close. I like the images. My favourite is: gardens are watered
with moondance and wine
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Thanks so much.
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Truth’s image as rose is perfect & to be on Truth’s side is always rewarding. Though the rose will have its thorns.
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Thanks Sumana….
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Doors provide such potent metaphors. Well penned as always.
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Thank you Paul.
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The eternal paradox.
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Indeed. Thanks Rosemary!
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This felt like the cry of one looking in a mirror – trapped on both sides.
Happy new year. I look forward to many more of your brilliant pieces.
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Thanks so much Kerry. A very happy new year to you too!
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Doors can be such a challenge, full of questions, fears, and harsh reality. I like to at least dream once in a while a door will open to peace.
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Definitely hope it does… thanks Susie.
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I feel this a lot… most of my nights are disturbed by nightmares… alas a well known thing
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That’s rough… hope the new year brings peace and joy to you.
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I love “where gardens are watered with moondance and wine”, and the surprise, on waking, of the narrator being the one both pounding on the door, and holding it closed. Very cool.
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Thanks Sherry 🙂
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‘fists that drip with wine, bloody and coloured by sunsets’.. is such a powerful image!
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Thank you Sanaa 🙂
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A beautiful tale of despair, longing and frustration. ‘fists that drip with wine….., – love this.
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Thank you Vivian!!
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🙂
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