On this last day of the first edition of Micropoetry Month, I thought we’d take a look at the Jisei, the Japanese Death Poem. The Jisei, written about death in general or about one’s own imminent death, reflects the poet’s contemplation of his mortality, of what was and what comes next both in the context of self and universe.
One translation of Basho’s famous Jisei goes like this:
On a journey, ill—
And my dreams on withered fields
Are wandering still.
I attempted a jisei a couple of years ago, here’s another shot at it. Share your micropoem, about death or maybe about life, using comments or Mister Linky.
And when I realize
there was no now,
that life, like time, was a linear illusion.
Like death.
What then?
A cherita as well in the same tone:
she wrote her jisei in six lines
one line about
the fickle, waning moon
two about a persistent mist,
and three about a hobbled dream
waiting for a perfect night
Thank you for this great month of daily challenges! I look forward to more! 😀 ❤
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Thanks so much for being a part of it. Greatly appreciated.
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Thank you so much for this month- it’s been a wonderful learning experience.
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Thanks so much Linda for being a part of Micropoetry Month. Appreciate it greatly.
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Ah! Wonderful lines Rajani. Haven’t heard of jisei, quite a learning experience. Never thought I’d be able to make it today. But posted 🙂
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Glad you could make it Sumana. Thanks for your participation right through the month with your stellar poems!
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It’s been so great being with you on this poetry journey. I learned a lot here, Rajani and I shall miss the challenge. 🙂
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Thanks so much Celestine… your poems are always an inspiration.
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I’ve really enjoyed writing with you all. I’ve learned so much! It’s been a pleasure. Thank you, ThotPurge!
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Thank you for being a part of it and sharing your poems. Was great fun!
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she could write a few lines more
or less cheat death in the process
tell night tell
life of elision as it slides off to
allude
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I think the unwritten lines will just stay stuck in the wind, until a worthy soul walks that same path some day. Isn’t that how poetry works! Thanks much!
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Beautiful, Rajani!!! and how appropriate to end this last day of poetry month with a Jisei
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Thanks Cheryl Lynn for your support and participation. Was so lovely to read your poems, especially the troiku you love so much!
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You are so generous, Rajani.
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Great month of poetry! I learned a lot.
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Thanks so much Sarah! That’s very kind. Was enormous fun, though am looking forward to the longer, rambling version now!!! 🙂
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