I’ve never attempted a cinquain before. I had to look up the rules and found that the original form developed by Adelaide Crapsey expected a seemingly unmanageable accentual stress rule as well as a syllabic pattern. I am writing this just as a 22 syllable poem following the challenging 2/4/6/8/2 pattern. I think this will be an exciting form once I figure out the best way to use the opening and closing two-syllable lines! Here’s my attempt- the theme today is love!
(1)
the hush
at summer’s end
when fireflies stoke the burn
the moon melts into liquid heat
with us
(2)
perhaps
in the morning
I can love with reason
but the night succumbs to the stars
perhaps
(3)
feel it
the angry wind
the hungry lick of rain
the storm that wraps our nakedness
ashamed
(4)
silent
your poetry
like morning dew on grass
does it know those secrets of love
I don’t
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All the poems were beautiful. They involved such a magical thinking
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Thank you 🙂
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The second stanza reads like a sigh, and it makes me wonder… if daylight brings clarity of mind.
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Only if daylight is a metaphor for some kind of understanding 🙂 Thanks Magaly.
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The second part makes me smile, especially the word perhaps. Wish I can try other poetry forms, too. Thanks for the read, Thot!
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Thanks Totomai.
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Each one a lovely write! As my footsteps followed your’s to your door, I anticipated something wonderful, and I found it.
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Thanks so much Annell.
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An intriguing form that – it looks to me – you have nailed … so much so, I am tempted to try it myself. I found all them: mesmerizing. All of them spoke to me. I really can’t pick a favorite.
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Thanks so much Wendy 🙂
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Oh my each lovely poem adds to the dreamy images of love.
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Thanks Donna.
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I especially like #2, sometimes we need just let go of reason for a night…
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Absolutely… I agree! Thanks Truedessa!
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Beautiful examples of the cinquain!
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Thanks Beverly.
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That was beautiful, but what a challenge. You people must be crazy to try something like this, I’m amazed. I can barely get a haiku out. I see my friend B is above me, I’d better go read his.
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Thank you 🙂
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Very beautiful. You aced the form. It makes me want to try it.
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Thanks so much Sherry!
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You took me on a journey there with emotions linked to seasons and the elements. Excellent!
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Thanks so much Vivian!
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I am utterly enchanted by this one line: “the hungry lick of rain.” I wish I had written it! 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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I do love your cinquains they go well together and separately… For me the syllable stress comes easy… but I think just counting them instead make the poetry more interesting.
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Yes the syllables were more fun than the stressed accents for me, though the 2 syllable lines can be quite challenging!! Thanks Bjorn.
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always impressed how the form never seems to get in the way of your imaginative flow:
“when fireflies stoke the burn” – singed in my memory that one!
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Thanks Laura. Am delighted you picked out that line!
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The cinquain form suits you. 1 is my favourite.
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Thanks Cressida 🙂
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A pure pleasure to read – beautiful.
And as Tournesol said: No matter what form, your words run like sweet nectar.
Anna :o]
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Thanks Anna, very kind words…appreciate them greatly 🙂
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Your writing is so vivid. Each of them gets inside me & makes me feel. My favorites are 2 & 3.
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Thank you Mary 🙂
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Looks like a very tricky form to play with, but these are nice. I like the second and fourth especially.
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Thank you Rommy.
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Beautiful, such a pleasure to read your poems.
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Thanks so much Madhuri. Greatly appreciate you stopping by.
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Good Sunday Rajani, today i linked to you a haiku at ‘Lunch Break’ and a Cinquain at ‘verses’
much love…
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Enjoyed them both..the cinquain was fabulous. Thanks so much Gillena.
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Gorgeous!💞 Especially love this one; “perhaps in the morning I can love with reason but the night succumbs to the stars perhaps.”💞
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂
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Wow! Love the varied images in all of them.
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Thanks Sumana 🙂
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I love this! Very engaging.
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Thanks so much:)
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No matter what form, your words run like sweet nectar.
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Thanks so much, that’s very kind.
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Excellent! It took me right in~
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Thank you! Glad you liked it.. a tricky form!!!
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A lovely form!
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