I tried the Naani form in the first week of Micropoetry Month. It is a four line poem that has 20-25 syllables. The first two lines provide the subject that the next two bring to an interesting close.
Thought we’d give it another shot as we make our way into the last week of November. Share your micropoem using comments or Mister Linky and do stop to read poems shared by fellow bloggers.
(1)
He once raged against
the colonial sahibs-
I eulogize grandpa
in the Queen’s English.
(2)
When all your questions
have the same answer,
you’ll find all your answers
came from a single question.
(3)
Love finds its
own direction somehow,
even the river cannot swim
back to the mountain.
Never tried it, will have to write one
much love…
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Hope to read it soon Gillena!!!
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Beautifully written, Rajani, especially love “even the river cannot swim
back to the mountain.”
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Thank you Cheryl Lynn 🙂
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These are really good!
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Thank you MZ 🙂
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Wonderful set,. My favourite is the third one. 🙂
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Thank you Celestine!
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Such talent! Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Love them all specially the twist in the last two lines of each. Posted 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I love all of them, but especially the first two!
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Thanks so much Cindy 🙂
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