They say poets shouldn’t write poems about poetry… but then, who else will!
What about poetry though? Bring your thoughts on poetry- how far does it reach, can it make a difference, are people who aren’t writing poetry, reading poetry? Or do you write for yourself, because you can, because you have to and it doesn’t matter if anyone else reads it or not. How do you engage readers, be effective, cause change, does that even matter? Be a poet, writing about poetry, for today!!
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Upside Down
He sits across from me
on the 8.14 train,
his eyes keen on the bottom half
of his folded tabloid,
I read the poem hanging upside down
on the back of his paper,
its silenced voice smelling of curdled ink,
its forced smile overturned into grief,
its wordless monochrome arms,
flapping like oversized shrouds,
unable to hold up the new world order.
He looks up and smiles politely,
turning the page.
This line: “its silenced voice smelling of curdled ink” Whoa!
What a revelation on how we can twist even art to serve our ulterior motives–sometimes without even realizing it!
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Thanks Frank.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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its wordless monochrome arms,
flapping like oversized shrouds,
unable to hold up the new world order
Wow! That is an awesome description. I was right there on the train with you. Great piece!
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Thanks so much Susie 🙂
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Delightful and inspired poem. Loved it.
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Thanks so much Rall 🙂
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Your words continue to intoxicate me, a pure pleasure to read.
Anna :o]
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Thanks so much Anna.
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I feel the poem bleeding… as a poem should
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Thanks Bjorn.
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I’ve done the upside down reading too, when I used to commute. Now I have the paper all to myself. I like the sense of isolation in this. Your reading the poem, him reading his tabloid.
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Thanks Toni.
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Whoever says poets shouldn’t write about poetry hasn’t felt (or read) enough poetry. What nonsense. Why should anyone stop writing about the thing that feeds them? Nonsense, I say.
That final smile, in your poem, made me smile… Because I’ve seen it. And I’ve smiled, too. 🙂
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Thanks Magaly 🙂
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You do all, Rajani, as we say here. This is wonderful. 🙂
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Thanks so much Celestine 🙂
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Poems really do speak to you. Love your descriptions.
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Thanks Vivian..
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😊
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You’re welcome!
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Oi day to day lives are busy and poetry gives some thing to it.
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That’s lovely to hear Vandana, enjoy the writing and the reading.
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“Good travellers leave no tracks.
Good words leave no trace.
Good counting needs no markers.” – Lao Tzu, Tao Te Ching
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Good poets write no poems?? 🙂 🙂
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🙂
Urgent poems write themselves. The poet can claim ownership, but the poem knows better (“We dance round in a ring and suppose /
But the Secret sits in the middle and knows.” – Frost)
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Write themselves and then what? A poem that is never read becomes the tree fallen in the forest…no matter its origin… 🙂
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the poem finds its reader like the sun finds the sapling; enough saplings found and you have a forest.
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Rajani, your wizardry with images is astounding, Great write!!!
much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena…
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A myriad of emotions in this, stark loneliness was one, but also the daily humdrum of modern living, and as Milan Kundera put it, ‘The Unbearable Lightness of Being.’
Once again, I am humbled.
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Thanks Hamish 🙂
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I just read your poem on Tumblr and it is fantastic! Wish I could write like that!!!!
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Those words meant a lot. Really appreciated.
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This is so powerful! Especially this; “I read the poem hanging upside down on the back of his paper,
its silenced voice smelling of curdled ink, its forced smile overturned into grief, its wordless monochrome arms” ..took my breath away!
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Thanks Sanaa..
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Oh I’m trying to imagine those ‘wordless monochrome arms, / flapping like oversized shrouds,’…and after reading this I don’t know how I dared write my lines and post here. Poetry is a topsy-turvy world, isn’t it?
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Your poem was beautiful.. thanks Sumana. Yes it is a completely topsy-turvy world.. don’t know what I’m doing sometimes trying to write and then there are the rare good moments that are entirely satisfying!!!! For some reason one came by yesterday when I wrote “Myself from Myself”!
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“There’s none so blind as they that will not see” so happily enduring the wrongs and injustices of life rather than voice their own opinion.
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That’s so true Robin… thanks 🙂
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I could hear the rumble of the train…I was there reading it too 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 Glad you liked it!!
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