A couple of tanka this Friday morning!
The beauty of tanka comes from the juxtaposition of disparate images, the gentle twist, the tug of emotion.
Try a tanka or two! Share your own micropoetry using comments or Mister Linky.
(1)
candles and flowers,
an impromptu memorial
where the horror struck-
one goodbye on a page ripped
from a new school book
(2)
the moon and I
like strangers
in an elevator-
trying not to look
at each other
A mastery in catching the mood and moment in both tanka there.
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Thanks Hamish 🙂
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So few words and yet two chapters in a romantic tragedy. Beautifully written, Rajani!
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Thanks so much Cheryl Lynn 🙂
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A tragedy and romance, so wonderfully juxtaposed. Well done, Rajani. Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you Celestine.. glad you liked it!
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The first one hits hard. What a place this world is! Love the hide & seek in the last one 🙂
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Horrible isn’t it, and feels like it is crumbling further everyday!!
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