Some mornings, a random headline catches your eye and spreads itself out in neat lines into a poem…all by itself. Of course, on other days the words just stare back at you while your muse leaves in a huff, banging the door shut behind her.
This one was in response to something that popped up in the news about yet another discovery in outer space.
Share your micropoetry- in any form- using comments or Mister Linky. If a headline inspires you, let it!
they say they discovered something recently, a
planet, a dwarf, a failed star (nomenclature has
to be irrelevant beyond a few thousand light years),
bigger than Jupiter, how colossal is Jupiter, how
mammoth is this galaxy, is there another at the end
of this gargantuan universe. See, the words I have for
‘big’ are only as large as my mind will allow, even
its wonder is constrained by the size of its own
incomprehension, this is the mind, you have to
understand, that keeps its cosmic incredulity, its
moons and meteors and gilt edged heavens in a safely
distant sky so that it can still believe I am significant.
I do think we humans sometimes do struggle with our significance in the light of the grandness of our universe!
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Thanks Mary.
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Yes, some things are too vast to comprehend, so let us stick to a smaller scale. Love this poem, and it’s ending.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Oh, I love that ending… And yes, you are definitely significant.
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Thanks Susie 🙂
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big’ are only as large as my mind will allow…My mind can only comprehend so much – even when someone stands up with marbles, beach balls, baseballs, etc. and does comparisons of planets and stars. Wow.
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Thank you Toni…
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What a beautiful poem/image you have created…you are significant and sparkle with your energy here, Ragani.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Ha! I love those closing lines….and, especially, our wonder constrained by our own incomprehension.
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Thank you Sherry 🙂
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Wise and wonderful.
And yes we are significant, for we exist.
Anna :o]
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Thanks Anna 🙂
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Totally relate to this. I’ve had a similar point of view myself. How we fool ourselves to think we are so significant
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And thus make our lives more complicated!! Thanks Namratha!
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Oh I loved this, quite excellent.
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Thank you John.
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You ARE significant, and so are all the yous in the world.
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🙂 🙂
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Magnificent write, Rajani. 🙂
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Thank you Celestine…
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We are indeed humbled in such a scenario
Happy midweek Rajani
much love…
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Thank you Gillena 🙂
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“the words I have for
‘big’ are only as large as my mind will allow, even
its wonder is constrained ”
Yes, yes! And look at the space we leave–the vastness in that split stanzas–between awe and expression, between experience and truth. Another poem that truly takes us beyond language. Wow.
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Thanks so much Susan… that’s very kind.
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Of that you are – I loved every syllable
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Thanks Jae…
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Love what you did with ‘meteor showers’…”big’ are only as large as my mind will allow, even / its wonder is constrained by the size of its own / incomprehension,”……How often we forget this making an infinite balloon of our intelligence. Real gems these words are, Rajani. Posted mine too 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂🙂
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