The last time I tried my version of Wallace Stevens’ “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird” I called it “ Thirteen Ways of Looking in the Mirror” . Think I need to change my perspective!
Try your own set of thirteen (or three or ten) or share any other form of micropoetry using comments or Mister Linky! Here’s mine.
Thirteen Ways of Looking at Myself
(1)
my silence
is the space
I concede to you,
sometimes
willingly
(2)
as a fragment of a fragment
of a fragment…
should I worry
that I am incomplete
(3)
whatever you see
when you see me,
know that inside
I am polished mirror
(4)
my anger has a way
of finding hidden words
while pain sits in the dark
reading someone else’s poems
(5)
what I know about love
I learnt from the river
that polishes one stone
into a glowing pebble
and lets another survive
(6)
I was once a chinar leaf
that fell, sunset soaked,
to the rhythm
of fading footsteps…
matter to matter
(7)
the space I occupy
is the space that separates earth from sky
like an unkindness
(8)
I am a grieving
widow, ashen draped,
mourning a rain
that never fell
(9)
this I know-
my shadow also believes
I am just a trick
of the morning light
(10)
I make lists on parchment
of things the world won’t give me-
in return for things
I won’t give the world
(11)
does rough wool
want to be fine muslin?
does my swirling mind
want to be Rumi’s song?
(12)
louder than any
silence I know
is the whisper of stones
in an abandoned temple
(13)
simultaneously
perpetrator and victim,
I judge myself
from the sidelines
Such a clever piece I loved every thought and word
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Thanks so much Jae.
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These are all stunning!
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Thank you Alys.
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Reblogged this on NANMYKEL.COM and commented:
I had to re-blog this…
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Thanks so much Nan Mykel…
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Fun. I’m kinda partial to number 6. Is there a way to re-blog?
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Enjoyed each and every one of them! Thinking of doing a series related to why I write in a similar fashion. Maybe before November is done..
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Looking forward to it Namratha…
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A beautiful magic of words – you are indeed thoughtful.
Anna :o]
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Thank you Anna..
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Those are all great things to consider when pondering on the thinker. Good poem!
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Thanks for picking up on the thinker image.. I thought it reflected exactly my state of mind as I wrote this.
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The whispers of stones in an abandoned temple stays with me.
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Thank you Rall 🙂
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A riveting expose in thirteen brilliant micropoems!
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Thank you Frank!
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My pleasure 😇
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Again superb poetry, I love all these facets of silence I love the fragrant and the leaf and Rumi and absolutely love “the whisprs of stones in an abandoned temple. I agree their silence speaks very loud. When is your poetry book coming out?
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Thank you Marja… Poetry book…seems to be a big question mark that I have no answer for!!! Do I – don’t I!! ????
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#11 is my favourite stanza
Much💖love
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Thanks so much Gillena.
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What a glorious mixture of humour and pathos in this contemplation. I am sure many of your readers will be thinking of writing their own list now.
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Thanks Robin.. yes a few of them did too!! 🙂
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Many excellent sets of circumstances relating to silence. I think each situation works so well..
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Thanks Eileen.
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Can your shadow teach me how to be a trick in the morning light? 😉
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There’s like classes and exams 🙂
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Well. I started, we’ll see what becomes of if. In the meantime I’ve linked 2 micropoems. Yours are beautiful☺
Pat
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Thank you Pat.. am off to read your links now!!
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All of these are wonderful poems, but the first, conceding silence….that is amazing.
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Thank you Toni 🙂
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WOW!!!!! I am applauding. I cant pick a favourite as each one is perfection. You have outdone yourself, Rajani! Stellar writing.
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Thanks so much Sherry…am really glad you liked them…:)
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You’ve been busy putting these together. They are all really good.
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Thanks John… once I decided what I wanted to write about…it got easier! 🙂
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Wow. Gosh. Each one hit home, some harder than others. I found this the most sad: “the space I occupy / is the space that separates earth from sky / like an unkindness” Such a surprise to find unkindness in the very center of the ways of looking at self! But I have been there and I know hugging and cherishing self is hard, That is why I found this one the most loving:
“louder than any
silence I know
is the whisper of stones
in an abandoned temple”
To know that is to arrive somewhere, and once you arrive, it is no longer abandoned.
Marvelous images.
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Once you arrive the space is no longer abandoned… oh Susan..words to live by. Thanks so much.
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Rajani, these are superb. 🙂 It’s not easy to write 13 poems at a sitting. Your observation of nature and your ability to blend aspects of it in your work is outstanding. 🙂
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Thank you Celestine, that’s very kind. Am so glad you liked them.
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Just gorgeous!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I also like the thirteen ways, but I’d have to write another thirteen to tell you how these affected me. To say I related deeply, sounds rather lame. I found a piece of me in each one. That’s a bit unnerving. But also somehow satisfying. Thank you,
Elizabeth
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2017/11/08/stray-thought-8/
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That’s so generous. Am glad they resonated though. Would love to read your take some day! Thanks Elizabeth.
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I would really enjoy the challenge, but at the moment, my thoughts are straying in another direction, lol. I will try it though, later… it might surprise you…
Elizabeth
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Looking forward to it then 🙂
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I have responded to your comment on my site. Thank you for making me think, lol,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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Ha. the shadow thinking you are just eh trick, that made me chuckle.
the first one though really has power to me, the conceding of silence to another.
It is relevant to me.
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Glad one of them resonated 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
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11 & 12 – and the others too but … I’ve been following these for a bit and today jumped in. https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/11/08/micro-poetry/
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Thank you! So glad you jumped in!! Thanks for sharing and hope to see you around here again!
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Love the variety, specially the chinar leaf, whisper of stones & Rumi’s song. Wow!…posted mine.
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Thank you… glad you liked it. 🙂🙂
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