in another life, beloved,
place on my parched lips
songs from ancient Persia,
so I can quote Rumi to Hafez,
debate Khayyam with the gods,
so I can read Jami with those who
split open verses and drink deep
your wine from their gurgling veins
or maybe we can sit by the Yamuna
and learn as the Taj recites,
her shoulders gently
rocking in the wind,
the moon floating
between her marbled limbs,
love’s cold anguish in quatrains
that should have no language
but teach me now, beloved,
to strip words of meaning
and wind them on the broken trellis,
I swear I won’t add one more inchoate
line to your crumpled sky,
show me beloved, how to write
with your eyes, how to ferment
this poetry in metered silences.
If you learn all those secrets of the poet’s craft, you will be a master indeed!
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If, indeed!! Thanks Magic!
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You have inspired me to read the Sufi poets which I know nothing of.
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Hope you enjoy it Rall..thank you 🙂
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I can only echo what so many other readers have said. The last verse is perhaps something we should all wish for as we express the wonder of living in our own words.
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Thanks Robin…
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Beautiful writing … incredible … your words circling round the edges of another dimension.
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Thanks so much Wendy..
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Beautiful
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Thank you..
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Your poetry always makes me sigh and then read the lines again. Beautiful images and entreaties to your Beloved.
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Thanks Sarah… the reference to the object of faith as beloved and faith itself as intoxicating wine runs through sufi poetry…
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split open verses and drink deep
your wine from their gurgling veins….love these lines. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you Ayala
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And I would add Basho and Issa to Rumi and Hafez. Lovely thoughts in this. Very delicate and yet, so very strong.
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Thanks Toni..
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You hit my all time favorites list (not all but certainly those that have influence me). ❤
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Glad you like those voices too… thanks ZQ..
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Oh what a beautiful work you have created and the ending is sublime!
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Thanks so much Donna..
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I love the references to the great poets, the “crumpled sky”, and the plea to be taught the nuances of poetry. Though, given your talent, I think you have already learned very well! You could be teaching yourself! Smiles.
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Thanks so much Sherry. That’s very kind, your support is much appreciated.
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Seems I spend a lot of time winding words on a broken trellis. I love the analogy. Lots to enjoy in this beautiful poem!
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Thanks so much Beverly
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“but teach me now, beloved,
to strip words of meaning
and wind them on the broken trellis,”
my favourite lines; Have a good Sunday Ranjani
much love…
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Thanks Gillena..
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Oh, so yummy and gorgeous, it makes me shiver with ecstasy. (And I love the poets you mention — except Jami, whom I’ve yet to discover and will now be seeking to do so.)
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Hope you enjoy reading Jami.. thanks Rosemary.
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There is real beauty in your words, seductive lines to draw the reader into the magic.
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Thanks so much Truedessa..
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Ah, like your style, high intellectual and seeking expression and emotional resolve in silence…Words are words, nothing can replace them, for sure, imaho
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Thanks so much..
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Ah – stripping words of meaning strikes me as interesting; and writing poetry with one’s eyes is a beautiful concept!
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Thanks Mary..
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but teach me now, beloved,
to strip words of meaning
and wind them on the broken trellis
Oh this tugs at my heart!❤️ Beautifully penned!❤️
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂🙂
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Yes, what we don’t say is as important as what we say. I love Hafiz and Rumi. I would also love Lao Tzu on my lips and some of those Chinese tea poets.
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I enjoy sufi poetry…the earthiness of it resonates deeply with me.
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wow ! that was gentle and tender and oh so beautiful
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Thanks Suyash!
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I really like the gentleness of your piece of fine poetry. I am about to google the names you’ve given reference too….Rumi….. Hafez. I’m intrigued to learn more. Thank you for another very good poem..
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Hope you enjoy reading Rumi and Hafez… thanks Julian.
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You’ve captivated the beyond, the essence, the soul, of poetry in your lines. It is indeed as delicate.
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Thanks so much Sumana…
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A well crafted and thoughtful poem – much to take away
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Thanks Jae 🙂
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Stunning:
“her shoulders gently
rocking in the wind,
the moon floating
between her marbled limbs,
love’s cold anguish in quatrains”
“I swear I won’t add one more inchoate
line to your crumpled sky,
show me beloved, how to write”
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Thanks so much Lily 🙂
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What a delicate piece, flows effortlessly like a stream. Good stuff indeed.
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Thanks so much, glad you liked it..
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