when the worlds collided
you rose from the pain,
rending the sky,
your jagged seams
filling with silver balm,
only the moon daring to soothe,
running her fingers
over the wounds of your birth,
drowning in your scarred umbilicus;
sagarmāthā, don’t you feel it now,
under you the earth still throbs,
the earth still remembers,
listen to her today,
she tries to sing you back into her womb,
her lullaby is washed away again
by your endless tears.
Well expressed…singing one back into the womb is a very comforting thought.
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Thanks Mary..
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This is so beautiful…!!
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Thank you Sreeja…
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A powerful poem – so full of emotion
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Thanks Jae 🙂
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What a great response to the prompt…and I loved learning that, “Sagarmāthā is the Nepali name for Mount Everest.”
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Thanks CC… 🙂
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I love the idea of being sung back into the womb and that the mountains can heal–beautiful work!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Thanks for the end note, helps to even more put things into perspective, Nice write
muchlove…
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Thank you.
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“…the earth still throbs, the earth remembers…..” I read this again after reading your note about the Himalayas. By now, the earth must be clogged with unshed tears. Loved your poem to the great mountains.
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Thanks Sherry.
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Ah beautiful loved these lines
“filling with silver balm,
only the moon daring to soothe”
I work with a young man from Nepal and he showed me some beautiful photos.
My brother went there as well when he was young. An amazing place
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It is a wonderful place…the architecture, the people and of course the endless mountains….. Thank you.
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Again and again I see earth as a whole and in these specific places as mother, birthing, grieving and child, hurting, continuing–and here your words make this visual and dramatic and intimate as well. O moon, thank you.
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Thanks Susan.. the personification of earth as mother goddess is entrenched in our culture and mythology.. the rest of the poem just wrote itself, somehow.
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‘listen to her today, she tries to sing you back into her womb, her lullaby is washed away again by your endless tears’ …. sigh.. this is soo deeply profound!💖
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Thanks Sanaa..
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This is a grand & beautiful birth story: your jagged seams / filling with silver balm, / only the moon daring to soothe,” so much in the name ‘sagarmāthā.
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Thanks so much Sumana…
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I like the image of sagarmāthā crying as it is high enough to observe what is happening all over the world and shedding tears for all it sees, but is powerless to do anything about it.
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Thanks Robin..
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Quite a mood you set
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Thank you… 🙂🙂
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Beautiful (as usual) Rajani. And you may have given me a way into a poem I have been trying to write about Denali, a mountain I visited 2 years ago in Alaska. I have the first 2 lines, and then became immobilized by trying to describe a grandeur that was so overpowering that I couldn’t get my arms — or words — around it. You came from the inside out, and succeeded. A very powerful poem! Thank you.
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Thank you Sarah! Denali National Park is big on my bucket list but it really is at the other end of my world! I am so looking forward to your poem now!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks so much…
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