rain accentuates everything…
like in the movies
singing through puddles
the dull eyes of dripping streetlights
crying raindrops…
I tried yesterday
dragging my half-poem out
as deluge turned to drizzle
to despair
to laughter…
we walked back slowly
wet, bedraggled, both still incomplete…
THOUGHT PURGE 
Such powerful analogy in this one ❤️
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Thank you Sanaa.
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Your imagery is so good that I could imagine myself there in the scene, feeling the atmosphere.
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Thank you.
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I specially love the special effects in:
crying raindrops
the dull eyes of dripping streetlights…
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Thank you Grace.
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I posted my half poem, then laughed. Sometimes it is only the laughter that brings completion.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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Indeed!! Thanks so much Elizabeth.
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Fantastic… love the concept of a half-poem… (still think you made it to the full)
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Thanks Bjorn.
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from the title onwards this poem is still the best
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Thanks so much Laura.
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Some poems just do not want to worked into something decent. Or maybe they work out at some point in the future. BTW, love the dripping streetlights line.
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Thanks Justin.. true some poems never see the finish line!!
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I always knew they were up to something when it rains in the movies 😉
This is a great poem…fully
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Thanks so much Janice 🙂
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I love this Rajani, the half-poem and the laughter ;o)
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I liked the flipping from deluge to drizzle to despair to laughter.
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Thank you Frank.. like the trajectory of a poem that doesn’t find nirvana!
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ooooooh. half-poem! what a turn! love the analogy in this!
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Thank you 🙂
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you’re welcome! 🙂
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fantastic ! The half-poem, incomplete, changing rain. Very fun.
BTW: second line with too many “in”s ?
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Thank Sabio…also for pointing out the typo…fixed it!!
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