I met him in that labyrinth of solitariness,
where no one else was supposed to be,
a makeshift mendicant,
his tin cup filled with unopened words,
dragging behind him,
a line of a hundred gagged whispers,
constellations shifting in their unseeing eyes;
in the end, there is never anything left to say,
even pain stops wailing after a time,
we sat there as the skies turned tricks
like a cheap watercolour,
dreaming ugly dreams of songs with no words,
there is no beauty in this penury of silence,
no richness in the indigence of this fractal quiet,
after all, we cannot be certain that
butterflies don’t talk to flowers,
or the lamplight to the oil stained dark,
I imagine conversations flow like moody rivers
between walls, between dawn and dusk
that never should meet, then pray tell me
who keeps account of this lost unsaid.
Beautiful…Nature has a voice few can hear. I can’t imagine what conversations float around us that we are deaf to.
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So true… thanks Susie 🙂
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I particularly love ‘conversations flow like moody rivers’.
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Thanks Rosemary 🙂
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I think butterflies do talk to the flowers. This is a wonderful poem!
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Thank you Marian ( I do too actually…)
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The “lost unsaid” is a double bind or blind, knotting the poem into a stillborn emotional poverty. “There is no beauty in this penury of silence, / no richness in the indigence of this fractal quiet … ” Unquietly, amen.
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And louder still..Amen. 🙂 Thanks Brendan.
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We cannot be certain… Love this!
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Thank you 🙂
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I do think that butterflies talk to flowers… where else would they find their reason?
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Where else indeed! Thanks Bjorn.
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in the end, there is never anything left to say,
even pain stops wailing after a time…
Such powerful words!
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Thank you Kerry.
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Loved the conceit here of everything communicating with everything else. Wonderful.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I imagine conversations flow like moody rivers
between walls, between dawn and dusk
that never should meet, then pray tell me
who keeps account of this lost unsaid.
Beautifully deep! ❤️
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Thank you Sanaa..
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Awesome write
A Happy St Valentine’s Day to you
much love…
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Thanks Gillena 🙂
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Woah!
‘a makeshift mendicant,
his tin cup filled with unopened words’
made me wonder why is he silent – what has he seen, heard, done to render him mute? And then I read that final stanza and wonder why we bother to speak at all because it seems like most of the time no one is listening. Brilliant poem!
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Thanks so much Kim, glad you liked it.
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Itna sannaaTa kyuN hai bhai?
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itna ghisa pita dialogue niklega, is liye 🙂 Don’t know where that poem came from really.. it’s the colour of the air this year..a sort of old pewter😶
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there are even more ghisa, more pita dialogues in store; enough pewter will pluck that genie right out of its slumber 🙂
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