the detritus of another summer afternoon
arrays itself on the blank page,
there is nothing to write,
a word or two drops by occasionally,
for the last hour ‘phantasmagoric’
has been swinging in the shadows
of an apple tree
with no fruit;
I am pleading for the gift of Midas,
the instantaneous alchemy of word to poem,
every word turning itself into sublime poetry
that will sail down with the glorious plumage
of the setting sky,
somersault with the iridescent fish,
and fall again as sweet rain
with the kiss of the eager sun;
I can hear you laugh,
the wind in your voice,
fluttering above, in the leaves,
Midas starved when food and drink
turned to gold at his touch,
I can hear you ask,
the poems swirling in your eyes,
tell me, what will you do,
when you run out of words?
Still ‘phantasmagoric’ listens
from a bough,
nibbling an apple,
his lips smile spun gold,
the sky is flying away
with a flap of its aurum tail,
the leaves and the wind
are filling my empty page
with polished iambic rain.
This is a thoughtful, cultured and well-penned poem. I enjoyed it very much!
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Thank you.
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I like the idea of the Midas touch with words. will remember that “prayer” when words fail me.
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Thank you 🙂
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Writing about not writing! How did you manage that? 😉
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Just gorgeous, in every way.
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Thanks Rosemary.
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Ah, beautiful imagery and profound message within those lines too.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I love the wisdom in this line “Midas starved when food and drink
turned to gold at his touch” and the great pictures you painted with your words
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Thank you Marja.
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I love this. Your muse came through with some truly gorgeous imagery. I can see phantasmagoric grinning in a tree, nibbling an apple. It doesn’t get any better than That!
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Thank you Sherry..this poem did write itself in a matter of minutes, so the muse has been kind. So glad you liked it!
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Strong writing! May Midas visit each of us as we pen our words. And may we never run out of them.
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Thank you Mary.
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I am pleading for the gift of Midas,
the instantaneous alchemy of word to poem,
every word turning itself into sublime poetry
that will sail down with the glorious plumage
of the setting sky
I just adore the images and sentiments here ❤️ touched my heart 🙂
Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thanks so much Sanaa.
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Wow, wow, wow! There in Midas’ touch is the ultimate fantasy. I sometimes wish for that, too. But then remember that it was touching his daughter that finally broke him. Would I rather be a poet or be present in every moment? Both, both! Who can choose is not a poet …
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Thanks so much Susan. 😀
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” am pleading for the gift of Midas,
the instantaneous alchemy of word to poem,
every word turning itself into sublime poetry
that will sail down with the glorious plumage
of the setting sky,”
i can certainly identify with that; thanks for dropping by to read mine today
much love…
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Thanks Gillena.
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Although not fond of that word which I won’t repeat, your poem is however an utter delight. I particularly liked
“I can hear you ask,
the poems swirling in your eyes,
tell me, what will you do,
when you run out of words?”
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Thanks so much Robin.
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I think he touched you – words are gold dust…and each that will not leave us can hold a treasure..
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Thanks so much Jae.
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And here’s one with a similar theme that I came across a couple of days ago: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=39861
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I think mine is so greedy and his “No, a little poem only” is completely brilliant.
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A reminder of the small small.
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I , too, like this prayer poem!
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I, too, thank you for this lovely prayer.
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