he was light
that spilt no shadow,
feeding cheer in silver spoons
to the waltzing moon;
each morning,
he traded joy,
sunshine cradled in his throat,
screaming bargains at passersby,
happiness, he shouted, sprinkled with stars,
how much will you pay for a smile?
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Lovely! Great imagery in this.
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Thanks Linda.
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words that make my soul smile. thank you!
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Thanks so much TioStib.
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Wonderful! Such a vivid, fascinating image.
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Thank you š
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How much will you pay for a smile? A lot comes to mind in that line. I would hope a genuine smile would come from the heart for free. Def, some shadow play here.
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It should right….Thanks so much!!
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Mid-day
shaDows
‘splay
liGht
directly
dOwn.. uP
goes the dArk..
Down coMes thE liGht..:)
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I love this. It made me smile. Excellent word work. Reminding me of “barkers” and of outdoor markets in the Middle East.
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Thank you š
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A sparkling poem! Nice.
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Thanks so much.
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This is stunning. š
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Thank you Kay.
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You’re welcome.
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I love this and it reminds me of a joyous character selling fruit in Camden Market. We would still be smiling when we put the fruit in a bowl when we got back home :o)
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Thanks so much š
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Wow! Just wow. I’ll have some star-sprinkled smile, pleaseeeee~ š
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Absolutely!! Thanks so much Maria.
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Oh I like this shadowless light. Love the phrase “sunshine cradled in his throat”.
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Thank you Mish. Much appreciated.
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What a creative response Thotpurge ~ I specially like the opening lines, as its very intriguing ~
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Thank you Grace.
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feeding cheer in silver spoonfuls
to the waltzing moon
That’s so beautiful!! ā¤ļø
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Thank you Sanaa šš
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This is just outstanding…I can feel the light and happiness bouncing off of it!
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Thank you..so glad you do.
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We pay for smiles all the time – or try to. I like this.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful work!
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Thanks so much.
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Oh my, such an interweaving of movement and visions spinning in exultation that the orbiting galaxy showers down such blessings.
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Thanks so much Brian. Much appreciated.
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Simply lovely!
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Thank you.
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Oh, I really like this! it burns the screen with joy. Thank you.
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Thanks so much š
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We need to clone this man…the world is in such desperate need of sunshine and smiles. Lovely.
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That’s so true. Thanks Victoria.
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The thought of paying for a smile, almost shady shadowed
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Interesting idea to trade happiness. I also liked the idea of light “spilling” no shadow.
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Thanks so much Frank.
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Wow! This quadrille sparkles and fizzes! Love it!
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Thank you Kim!!
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Goodness. This is, quite simply, STUNNING.
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Thanks so much š
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