where the grey line runs
between absolutes,
the flaccid middle ground
at the edge of which
the truth in the mirror
is a lie;
they shake hands and depart,
leaving a little of themselves,
leaving a little broken,
leaving a wave of guilt and shame
under the false glimmer
of yet another promise;
watch if your eyes will dare to see,
as pain trades with memory,
as want masquerades as need,
as love swallows a tear,
or two,
as truth nibbles at fear;
for the clouds flirting
with the nubile moon,
have long known
that she has secrets to hide,
why cry, they seem to call to me,
this is the way of the sky.
A wonderful piece! The feeling was that of a pinball machine, the ball hitting the obstacles. The clatter and the wave seem so perfect!
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Thanks so much. Glad it brought up such an interesting image as you read it.
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Hmm too bad mankind can’t take his “temper tantrums” skyward. Excellent poem
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Thank you š
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How beautifully you have written this. Mutual agreement is one thing but pressure to change one’s mind is another when it might be best to agree lest one gets hurt. many nations have been embroiled in war seeking friendship with a strong neighbor.
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Agree!!! Thank you Robin.
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This was fascinating esp the end “why cry, they seem to call to me,
this is the way of the sky.” Very intriguing.
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Thanks so much Mosk. š
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Oh I do think that we have to live in that middle ground, the alternatives are sometimes even worse
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True – as long as we aren’t swallowed up by that middle ground entirely! Thanks so much Bjorn.
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so much wisdom in these words. The way of the sky – with storms, clouds and the sun. Such is ife. You’ve written something very beautiful here.
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Thanks so much Myrna. Appreciate your comment greatly.
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A great read. The concluding lines are beautiful.
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Thanks so much Purba.
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why cry, they seem to call to me,
this is the way of the sky.
One need not have to insist when laws of nature extend their rights!
Hank
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Thank you Hank!
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watch if your eyes will dare to see,
as pain trades with memory,
as want masquerades as need,
as love swallows a tear,
or two,
as truth nibbles at fear
Powerful lines!! ā¤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thank you Sanaa.
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Oh! Wow! How much we bite our lips to walk that thin line when it preserves relationships. I much prefer consensus to compromise, but it takes so much longer. I love the Moon here, the images that come to mind of love and night as this poem opens to me.
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Thank you Susan… am glad the poem worked and threw up the right images!
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What a wonderful exploration of compromise – i think perhaps we live most of our lives in the middle ground where ‘truth nibbles at fear’ – and yet as the sky tells us – that is how things may just be
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Thanks Jae… maybe that’s where we lose our real selves too…
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“as love swallows a tear,
or two,
as truth nibbles at fear;”…love this…
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Thank you Sumana…
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Truth unveils; it’s nibbling at fear is an unqualified good; and by a tiny stretch of imagination we can glimpse it hacking away at the “wave of guilt and shame” as well. So what if the way of the sky is to hide; the unveiling will put the sky to shame š
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May I please borrow from that stash of optimism you’re hoarding š
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š in fact a gnawing cynicism animates what passes off as optimism from a distance (hopefully keeping delusion in check as well).
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I love “as pain trades with memory” and, especially, “this is the way of the sky.” This is a very cool perspective.
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Thanks so much Sherry š
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