The yellow dahlias were startled at first, then they shook their pretty heads in unison and laughed into the sudden sunshower. Behind me, the rhythm of her brass mortar and pestle unchanging as she hammered betel nut and lime into submission, the old woman cackled. I turned to see her toothless smile radiant across her cloudy face. “The raven and the fox are getting married,” she said as I strained to catch the slurred words, red juice pooling at the edge of her mouth. I nodded slowly at the old tale as she laughed again, her eyes filling. “So should you.”
I watched her. Half old crow and half cunning fox. Everything I knew, she had taught me since I was a little girl. I raised my face to the scent of the soft drizzle and imagined satin black wings that would let me fly into the freshly arched rainbows.
painted in liquid light
this grey gold sky
drips into my empty teacup
Beautiful haiku to complete. 🙂
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Thank you Celestine!
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Oh those dahlias lured me in right away and I enjoyed the whimsical feel of this. Your haiku is so beautiful.
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Thank you Mish 🙂
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So beautiful!
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Thanks Carol. Hope you’re having a lovely day!
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You are welcome. You too!
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Really lovely work!
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Thanks so much.
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That haiku is gorgeous!
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Thank you Bryan.
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a perfect start to a new summer season. thank you.
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Thanks so much TioStib. Hope the summer brings you much joy.
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Ooooo. Intriguing!
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Thank you 🙂 🙂
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That haiku sets off this wonderful poem perfectly.
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Thank you Misky.
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This is such a beautiful narrative. Characterization of the dahlias and the old lady was splendid. I could picture it so clearly.
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Thanks Victoria.
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Sounds like your teacup is soon to overflow with such beauty, Thot!
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Thank you Walt.
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I love the thoughts of the rain filling your teacup. Wonderful!
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Thank you Toni… great prompt with the 50 rain words!
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The story is fascinating – and the verse is incredibly beautiful.
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Thank you Rosemary for your kind words.
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Love the fabled story, written in the dazzling sunshower. Your haiku is stunning with the painting in liquid light and empty teacup.
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Thanks so much Grace. Glad you liked it.
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You had me inside your words in that first sentence! 🙂
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Thanks Lillian 🙂
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Oh, I love that haiku!
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Thank you Kim.
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Such great and compelling images, the sounds and colours are just captivating. Loved your take on the rain.
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Thanks so much Michael.
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I do love how you both paint the scene with the rain…. I had not heard about the tale for sunshower but it’s so perfectly done so I can see the old woman in front of me.. the haiku breaks off beautifully..
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Thanks so much Bjorn 🙂
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“Painted in liquid light.” Wonderful line. 🙂
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Thank you Josslyn 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Oh… i JUst
Love thaT
Japanese
word noW for
rain namED
Tenki Ame..
noW that phrase
would be a LovELy
metaphorse for God
ReaL as Ki.. iS like Qi..
like Chi.. Dao.. eTc..
so ten
Ki
could
be ten
times
better
than
Ki alone..
and Jesus
F iN Christ
A mE instead
oF i mE.. iS what
thE F Jesus was/
iS talKinG about per
yes.. the God oF Nature
then as humble Yogi-like
dude in the first gnostic
place of the middle east noW..
But
i
digresS noW..;)
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Beautiful. Intense Deja vu. Where have I heard the old lady quip about the fox and raven before?
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Thank you.. a few versions of that tale go around don’t they!! 🙂
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