seven steps
around the sanctified fire,
ghee-seared smoke
veiling my eyes,
my red stained feet
following yours,
over blessed marigold petals
and auspicious turmeric rice,
chants sliding into the warmth
of your fingers over mine,
seven steps,
each a prayer,
a propitiation,
a purpose,
a pledge,
mirroring the universe’s motion,
circumambulating a life source,
atom and earth,
body and soul,
seven steps
to begin a journey,
seven steps
to fulfill seven births,
seven steps
to transcend the seven worlds,
seven steps
to get so far;
just one to turn away.
A beautiful poem, and a lovely ritual for a life-long commitment.
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Thank you Misky 🙂
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A lovely example of commitment indeed!
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Thank you Mary 🙂
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Beautiful descriptive words. So true about the one step.
Anna :o]
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Thanks so much Anna…
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Lovely. Reminds me of a doco I saw long ago, when elderly Gandhi and his wife described their wedding ritual and briefly re-enacted walking that circle.
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Thank you Rosemary.. don’t believe I’ve seen that one but glad you had a visual of it as you read the poem!
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This is a beautiful ceremony and has such meaning; how well you have illustrated this with your stunning words.
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Thanks so much Robin, glad you liked it.
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This sounds like a beautiful ritual and you wrote beautifully about it. Sad, your last line is so true.
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Thanks Myrna, yes sadly, it takes very little to break a relationship…
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“chants sliding into the warmth
of your fingers over mine”
oh!
Love all that this ceremony means. It seems impossible that only one step could negate all of this beauty and spirit.
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Yet, we see it everywhere…the pressure on modern relationships is too much for old traditions to sustain.
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youd think after those 7 steps that the one step would be so difficult. I enjoyed the motion leading to the marriage commitment.
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Thanks so much… yet it is that one step that determines so much!
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Gorgeous write 😀
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Thank you Sanaa.
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Hindu wedding is all about rituals and customs, they teach us the actual essence of a married life…also display the level of commitment that is needed. Beautifully penned….wow!
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Thank you Panchali 🙂
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I love this poem, and the ritual of the Seven Steps. That is the scene in the movie Gandhi that I love the most….so beautiful, that commitment. So compelling your closing line – just one step to turn away. So sad.
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Thank you Sherry, I enjoyed writing this one..though things are changing very rapidly and old traditions are not able to keep up!
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Such an earthly feel to this! Lovely!
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Thank you Bekkie.
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Again – the way you have used colour and scent to immerse us in the scene really is intoxicating..and your words runs (a propitiation, a purpose, a pledge) – add to the weight of ceremony and commitment
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Thanks Jae 🙂
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so beautifully you’ve described the seven step journey of two souls…each step a prayer and promise indeed…love the scenes to remain forever in their heart….
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Thank you 🙂
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Ai! Great ending! I really liked the seven step mantra in this, the inner rhythm and warmth, but am especially fond of what I might call ethnic touches that really give your poetry character, like the ghee, veil, and red stains. I almost would like not to say it yet again, but I like the sensuality in your writing too, always so well-dosed.
Basically, for the reasons just said. This was a highly enjoyanle read, and you cannot want more than that as a reader.
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Thanks Hamish. So glad you picked up on the cultural references. At some point, as one keeps writing, perhaps a unique tone and texture will evolve…am still in the experimentation stage I think !!
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Lovely,
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow
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Thank you Pratyusha.
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