they never asked her
but she always knew.
from her recliner in the shadow of the neem,
she looked at their empty yard,
no sign of life, even the marauding ravens were gone.
he had brought the girl there, young, from money,
to that rickety house that had stood empty for years,
her embroidered silks and sequinned georgettes
drying away from the new cotton sheets,
on a separate line in the shade;
until months later, washed out,
like cloud sponged rainbows,
they fluttered, disinterested, in the summer sun.
then new clothes appeared
from strip mall thrift stores,
her mulmul blouse upside down with his shirt
in the rain,
their arms barely touching.
she brought a bird-feeder, the girl,
emptying her heart with tap water
into the blue plastic dish;
all her little handkerchiefs,
paisleys painted on the ends,
hand-in-hand like prayer flags
whispering to the wind for help.
until that day
when like red-fanged bats
roosting upside down,
old blue jeans,
dark grime still in the hem,
and a worn grey fleece,
the blood stain
a wound across its chest.
she wondered why the papers
called them secretive and cold,
their marriage had always hung
from wiggly wooden clips,
out where everyone could see,
out where she could watch them
from the shadow of the neem;
an empty bird feeder
knocked out of the ground
by a pitiless wind.
they never asked her
about that green print dress,
but she always knew.
The signs that things go well or badly in a relationship are certainly apparent to all who take an interest and look for them – whether they are the laundry drying on the line, or the glances between partners at a dinner party, or the touch or lack of it by complicit hands. A lovely poem that has such deep sadness in it…
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Thank you Nicholas.
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Clotheslines carry so many stories. Sadly, dryers do not.
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This is absolutely lovely….so many wonderful images in this….and yes the clothes line takes me back. I love the metaphor in this. Truly stunning!!
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Thank you Carrie…
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Brilliant piece….the writing appeals to the senses!!…the images keep slipping creating a visual art! Love it!
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Thank you Panchali…
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A well crafted, touching tale.
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Thanks so much.
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Yes, I remember the times when we knew about everyone from the washing on their lines. This piece is so powerful in the things you DON’T say!
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Thanks so much Rosemary.
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Wow you hit pay-dirt with this intriguing poem it held my attention to the last word guiding me to that last phrase, which left me wondering … I too remember growing up with a clothes line (in fact still have two) and know how you can’t really hide anything hanging on those lines .. funny how no one ever asked her about that green print dress …. it would seem that openness doesn’t always go in both directions as people see what they want to see.
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People do see what they want to see..absolutely right. Thanks so much..am really glad you liked it.
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🙂 you’re very welcome.
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There is somethng very beautiful about washing on the line in the bush. The cows love it too. I
don’t know why !
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You’ve done it again: create such a seamless, beautiful story, so full of meaning and mystery. I love how the guiding image is the clothes on the line. Very nice.
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Thanks so much Matthew.
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This is stunning–gorgeous writing! (I now have poem envy!)
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Thanks so much Audrey 🙂
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the void is so pronounced in so many images….beautiful…
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Thanks Sumana.
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This is an amazement of a poem – and story. LOVE the perspective, a life as seen on the clothesline……….exceptional phrasing, like “washed out like cloud sponged rainbows”, (wow!), and the blouse and shirt together on the line, “their arms barely touching”, and the handkerchiefs like prayer flags, asking for help”. Stunning writing. Just so good.
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Thanks very much Sherry… so overwhelmed by your kind comment.
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My favorite image is of the handkerchiefs hanging hand in hand like prayer flags. And, oh, I would like to know the story behind that green print dress.
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Thank you Mary, glad you liked it.
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This is so beautifully written 😀
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Thank you Sanaa..
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The progression is wonderful… how the verse moves from one scene to another is perfect. I love how you weave all these images of linen on the clothes line and particularly that of the bird feeder which tells a story unto itself.
-HA
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Thanks so much and am glad you picked up the bird feeder bit!!
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I really love the feeling of those secrets of the clothes line, and their secrets.. we do know a lot of secrets from those clothes, and how they change, and of course it speaks so well with the title.
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Thank you Bjorn 🙂
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I remember the tell tale washing on the line so well. How beautifully you wrote this piece.
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Thank you Robin.
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Such a powerful, touching story – it is hard to pick a favourite image but i think her old clothes becoming cloud sponged rainbows was the most touching for me – superb poem
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Thank you Jae, glad you liked it.
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Wow! I grew up with the clothes line–there were no secrets and there was no way NOT to air the family’s dirty linen. So this story hits and resonates. And it reminds me of that short story “Jury of Her Peers” by Susan Glaspell (the play “Trifles”)–where the neighbor women hid the evidence when the wife finally did away with the husband. They felt that they were the guilty ones for ignoring the signs. Wow and wow again.
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Thanks so much Susan…I must look up this story or play…eerie similarity!
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Stunning!
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Thanks so much Tio. Glad you liked it!
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