blurred evening
the rain dissolves
the colours in the sky
For CDHK where we learn Basho’s ‘Sketch’ or ‘Shasei” technique, strongly advocated by Masaoka Shiki, which requires the scene to be depicted exactly as it is without riddles, pun or rhyme.
Basho writes:
early autumn
the sea and rice fields
one green
So very well done…
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Thank you Janice!
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A moment as it is … caught well
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Thank you Chèvrefeuille
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My pleasure Thot
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Very nicely done, in keeping with Basho’s.
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Thanks so much Hamish…
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That is a beautiful way of describing this!
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Thanks Carol 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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perfect image of this moment
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Thanks Candy
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Stunning! ‘Dissolves’ is the perfect word choice. I’m really liking the technique lessons too, thank you!
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Thanks Ryan.. its on this whole month at CDHK, will try and keep pace!
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Smashing it so far 😉
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🙂 I skipped one on Rhyme… somehow rhyming haiku just didn’t feel right.
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