at midnight,
moonbeams crisscross,
building a silver hammock
over the somnolent lake,
she stretches at last,
unbuttoning life, slowly,
one reluctant clasp at a time,
reality pooling like indigo silk at her feet,
seeping into the detritus of time and space,
just the singular drama of her breath,
not alive, an evanescent animation,
like a breeze slipping in and out of the first spring leaves;
a channel,
between earth and sky,
reading their unsent messages,
feeling their forces harmonize
along her star encrusted frame,
the smell of ancient alluvium
rising like a ghostly stalagmite,
swallowing all context,
shrouding the mystery of being,
nothing can exist, without moment and place,
just the odd spectacle of her breath,
masking her absence,
like a question, a prayer falling with the early rain.
Beautifully articulated ! ๐
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Thank you ๐
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You are welcome ๐
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Beautiful. Form and structure are vessels for the spirit.
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Thanks Carol ๐
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You’re welcome!
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Yet that nothing” has in-spira-tion. Even this poem recognizes that!
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Thanks so much Susan…
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Such beautiful imagery throughout…I love the textured fabric of this poem and this:
“moonbeams crisscross,
building a silver hammock
over the somnolent lake,”
Beautiful!
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Thanks so much Hannah
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not alive, an evanescent animation,
like a breeze slipping in and out of the first spring leaves;
Beautifully expressed Thot! One could feel the quick movements of animation that moved through the intricate threads of modern living
Hank
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Thank you Hank!
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I loved the tender description of the moon beams. This was gorgeous.
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Thank you Moskowitz!!
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this is magical. the outer is a beautiful maiden stripping to take a bath in the night but then there’s also an inner meaning to it all. perhaps of mother nature and her glories. profound write!
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Thanks James… I think it resonates with a line in your poem as well..”breathing but dead”….!
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There are so many illustrations of the moon as a couch for adventurous people and you come up with a most beautiful one with your character leading this enchanted poem on. Excellent work.
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Thank you Robin.
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Beautiful imagery ๐
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Thanks Purba…
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So beautiful. This reads like a lullaby for the heart. I love it.
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Thank you Myrna ๐
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I love your closing line especially…..
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Thanks Sherry!
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“unbuttoning life, slowly,
one reluctant clasp at a time,”
as usual, a wonderful way with words and imaginative imagery that you conjure with almost a whisper
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Thanks so much Laura…
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can’t forget the silver hammock over the somnolent lake…beautiful…
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Thanks Sumana
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This for me was enchanting. Line after line after line
Much love…
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Thanks Gillena ..have a lovely day.
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I really enjoyed the ethereal mood of this poem!
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Thank you Mary.
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We particularly love that moonbeam hammock – i think we could happily slumber there..such a wonderful array of imagery
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Thank you Jae… ๐
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Thoughtful and beautiful. The moon creates a wonderful backdrop as her breath is like a mist and her prayer a new awakening.
Amazingly animated!
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Thank you. Appreciate your comment greatly.
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A prayer falling with the early rain…. such a beautiful image ๐
Beautifully put!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thanks Sanaa ๐
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Thot
This is well written, a pleasure to read and savour.
Best Always
john
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Thank you John, am glad you liked it. Appreciate your comment greatly.
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Lovely, Rajani… “nothing can exist, without moment or place…” I liked that. It gave me a sense of the way each moment is linked to the others, and how each one reveals something unique.
And how eternity must be a moment, and a place…
Peace
Michael
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Thank you Michael… was wondering what we would be if our lives had no context.
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