I hadn’t really climbed that tree,
(or any tree)
but I’d seen how she brushed
the silver stubble on the cheek of the moon,
seen where the first shoot
that dared to break through
into a sunlight it always knew
would be waiting,
where that first shoot had ascended
clambering over darkened rings;
they said up there I could put my mouth
on the lips of the cloud
and drink from rivers gone dry,
they said up there the wind
would sit on my shoulder
and nuzzle my neck as it read
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they said it was a place where shadows could not reach,
where that broken voice would begin to fade,
a place where I could knit sunbeams,
into mittens for my trembling heart,
a place where I could learn to love again;
but this morning there she was,
like a queen felled,
lying twisted on her side,
squirrels still scampering along her bleeding legs,
people stepping over her naked crown,
shouting into the silence
that hid at the back of her leaves
like frightened spores;
and i who had never climbed that tree,
(or any tree)
crying on the kerb,
the wind watching listless
from the shadows
that began to creep into her knowing eyes,
tears pooling into muddy streams
that swallowed the unravelling clouds,
half-words still tangled in her fingers
and love,
like a secret whispered by the dead,
like a tear perched on the very edge,
love still unlearned,
stranded in the alleys between the stars,
lost in the endless blue of its path,
with no way,
with no way to come back home.
This is awesome. Wonderful lines, fantastic images: rendered so skillfully.
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Thanks Wendy 🙂
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I love the switch in the narrative voice from non-climber to tree and the telepathy/empathy in knowing the trees hopes and dreams. Sad, I always think, to step over the dead trees.
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Thanks Susan…
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Your poem is beautifully accomplished. Trees give us so much and it truly hurts to see them cut down to make room for what? Thank you for writing this,
Elizabeth
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Thanks Elizabeth…
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I love and revere trees, and get the full tragedy you have conveyed so movingly.
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Thanks Rosemary.. 🙂
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This reminded me of the Weeping Willow that had to be taken down ..it broke my heart the day I drove by and saw her demise. I pulled over and took a picture of her and cried for her as she could no longer weep.
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Thanks so much for reading, am glad you liked the poem.
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This is me and about the many losses in my life. I am the second part of this poem where I am completely broken after the loss of someone or something that was dear in my life. Thanks for this. tears.
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Glad you could connect with the poem. Appreciate your response and wish you strength to deal with your loss in the best possible way.
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this for me can be about so many “losses” in my life. I am the second part of this poem. I feel broken just to see someone or something being taken from my life and never to be replaced again. tears.
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Thanks James… it’s exactly the way I pictured the tree..as a metaphor for a loss..
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like a secret whispered by the dead,
like a tear perched on the very edge,
love still unlearned,
such poignant lines ! well written
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Thanks Suyash
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I went out on a limb and my heart sank when she was felled.
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Thanks Colleen…am glad the poem worked.
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Rajani, this is a simply gorgeous poem….so many beautiful lines. I especially love “a place where I could knit sunbeams into mittens for my trembling heart.” Wow. I also love the emotion with which the narrator stands beside the fallen tree, the feeling that a murder has been committed. That’s how I feel too. One of my very faves of yours……..
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Thanks so much Sherry …always grateful for your support.
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The whole second stanza is utterly stunning! Lines like, “a place where I could knit sunbeams,
into mittens for my trembling heart” make it into this powerful depiction of a place so magical one cannot fathom it could ever be torn down, so when it is, the reader weeps too. Incredibly good 🙂
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Absolutely C.C…for me it was metaphorical in a sense… thanks so much.
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I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read….with lines like, ‘but I’d seen how she brushed the silver stubble on the cheek of the moon’….yes what a vision.
And I who have climbed a tree, knows these words to be true….
‘they said up there I could put my mouth
on the lips of the cloud
and drink from rivers gone dry,
they said up there the wind
would sit on my shoulder
and nuzzle my neck’
And my heart bleeds when a tree is felled by man or nature…really one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read!
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Thanks so much Donna…appreciate your comment greatly. Glad you liked it.
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you’ve truly created a myth of a tree….its being and its becoming with such deep emotion…this poem is soul stirring….
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Thanks so much Sumana, glad you liked it.
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Beautifully penned. This poem has an emotional impact..especially thinking of the tree lying twisted on her side. I will think of trees in my environment in a different way today, being thankful that they still stand.
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Thank you Mary… yes, I do think we need to appreciate them while they are still around..people, as well.
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Gorgeous – gave me the remarkable beauty of the felt experience so that I could join you in grief and despair of beautifully expressed loss
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Thank you…appreciate your comment very much.
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This is absolutely splendid – death of trees is always devastating… And you write so tenderly about her both alive and the way she is splendid on her wake.. I have tears in my eyes from reading…
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Thanks for that beautiful response Bjorn. Much appreciated.
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Wow ! this was an absolutely stunning personification of trees. i used to sit in front of this tree when growing from the tumultuous innocence of youth into a wiser adult. i would face the tree attempting to attain wisdom by becoming ‘one’ with it (teachings of the ‘Tao’/i ching)
gracias. i too am totally disheartened by the felling of old trees. the are the roots of earth touching the clouds and sky, marrying with the universe.
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Thank you Marco… living in a concrete urban jungle..one does feel the loss of every single tree, especially the ones that have been there for ever..trees… or people.
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This is a stunningly beautiful poem full of such intense feeling. Absolutely wonderful!
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Thank you Robin 🙂
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‘They said up there I could put my mouth on the lips of the cloud’ – my favourite line in this wonderful poem..felling trees can spark huge emotions..they seem so constant in our landscape..strong..certain..reliable..and if we remember and reflect as you have done here we know that they too are alive..
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Thanks Jae Rose 🙂
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like a secret whispered by the dead,
like a tear perched on the very edge,
love still unlearned,
Beautiful lines 🙂 hope you’re having a wonderful day.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thanks so much Sanaa
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Really love the imagery you bring with your words, I remember the days of climbing trees as a kid and the adventures of flying to faraway lands or just the solitude to think. The sorrow of seeing no more the trees that were once there and the memories of what was. Excellent poem!
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Thanks so much..it is really difficult to see old trees being chopped down to make way for “development”….
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