why search for words-
when the frozen moonlight
sings aloud for us
***
how low
the night bows
to her kohl-lined eyes
***
rainbows dissolve
as the sky slides down
to watch the peacocks dance
why search for words-
when the frozen moonlight
sings aloud for us
***
how low
the night bows
to her kohl-lined eyes
***
rainbows dissolve
as the sky slides down
to watch the peacocks dance
WOW! I am speechless Thot
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Thank you Chèvrefeuille. So glad it worked. Greatly appreciate your prompts this month!
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I hope to see you responding in January too Thot. The new promptlist is ready and online.
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Will check out the prompt list immediately. Thank you. Have a great new year!
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Thank you Thot. Have a great year my friend
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I am enjoying this whole series, Rajani. This particular collection inspired me tonight. Something about the second and third piece, how they begin with movement perhaps, seems paradoxically to define for me the way we enter the harbor of silence…
Peace
Michael
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Thanks so much Michael. I think I learnt, by following a haiku prompt right through this month, that the more you look within yourself, the easier it becomes to write -but it is so hard to do it honestly!
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Beautiful! My favorite is the second one.
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Thank you 🙂
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Stunning !
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Thank you 🙂
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The power of your words…the power of your magic……am in awe….you never go too far and make your haiku cluttered with complexity, you get it so right, and yet, you go further with your haiku than anyone…wonderful.
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Thanks Hamish.. you’re very kind.
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Your haiku is so good! Have you thought of publishing? Lovely.
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Not really thought about it …but am going to do a sort of compilation of this series of haiku soon. Thanks so much.
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You’re welcome!
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rainbows dissolve
as the sky slides down
Sometimes when the support system fails it will bring down even established outfits that are beautiful and stable! Great thots!
Hank
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Thank you Hank 🙂
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Wonderful imagery, esp. the kohl lined eyes!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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