last monsoon cloud weeps on a rocky shoulder soft rain
Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, where Basho’s journey to the Deep North (Oku no Hosomichi) continues. On the road to Kanazawa, Basho remarks on the presence of autumn, despite the indifferent sun… a reminder of the changing season.
I love these, I also agree that you are truly on top of this challenge, a gem every time:)
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Thanks so much, that’s very kind.
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Oh my. Both are marvelous but the second one is astounding.
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Thank you…am glad you liked it… This challenge is getting tougher each day!!
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Yes it is but you are in fine tune!
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