after the comma
sadly
nothing
***
there
in another unmarked grave-
another unfinished poem
***
mourning-
the way the sky
brushes a broken wing
after the comma
sadly
nothing
***
there
in another unmarked grave-
another unfinished poem
***
mourning-
the way the sky
brushes a broken wing
the third one was my favorite. this a very keen and curious observation. hope the sky provide wind to support the broken wing
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Thank you so much…am glad you liked it 🙂
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My favorite of this set is the first one. Such a sense of finality. Awesome write.
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Glad you liked it, thanks!!
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I love them all but the one with the unfinished poem got to me. really good writing!
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Thank you..really appreciate your support.
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My pleasure!
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You really managed to stay to and within the theme, and each haiku seemed to have and give more, until the third………………………………………………………………………………………………wow………………………………………………………………….wow…………………………………………………………………..”speechless”
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Thanks Hamish… am so glad you liked it. What a journey!
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