just one seagull
swooping down through the mist
a question
***
behind
billowing curtains of mist
the sea changes
***
I shed a bitter tear
see how sweet water
sinks in the brine
just one seagull
swooping down through the mist
a question
***
behind
billowing curtains of mist
the sea changes
***
I shed a bitter tear
see how sweet water
sinks in the brine
our haiku is always very crisp. I enjoy reading it very much!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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A fine set. I particularly liked the first one, using classical haiku technique.
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Thanks Hamish…
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