The Hills

winding hill track
both sides
filled with beauty

***
shadows lengthen
will this mountain know me
if I return

Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, where Basho’s journey to the Deep North (Oku no Hosomichi) continues. Leaving Kurobane, Basho crosses on horseback to see the Killing Stone near a  poisonous hot spring and near Ashino, rests awhile in the shade of a weeping willow.
Previous posts in this series are HERE.
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41 thoughts on “The Hills

  1. i enjoyed this very much … a question I myself have asked ad I agree with Bjorne … that line break is inspired, it does bridge the two nicely together.

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  2. love the progression from the first to the second haiku.
    yeah, makes me wonder if he had stopped to admire the beauty along the tracks, thus “shadows lengthen” (time had passed quickly) without him knowing it. 🙂

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  3. such ensuing surroundings will generate likely questions; its not always easy though to voice them but you have so purely

    Thank you for dropping in at my Sunday Line Today

    much love…

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  4. Both are beautiful. I like the thoughts expressed in the second, and as I think metaphorically I wonder about all the ‘mountains’ I have climbed in life…..

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