I had to slow down and absorb those words to fully SEE that insanely beautiful juxtaposition. Once I got it, I stopped breathing for a second, like my chest was in shock. GOod stuff
Thanks Bjorn.. was going with Hamish’s definition of the shaman haiku as an interpretation of nature converging on an internal human experience, mediated by the shaman. It’s lovely when a haiku can be peeled to find more than one meaning!
The wind, the breeze, fanning this way, and that. A haiku like we need more of, beautifully illustrated with words within the words. Thank you – for this haiku, it runs deep.
THOUGHT PURGE 
I had to slow down and absorb those words to fully SEE that insanely beautiful juxtaposition. Once I got it, I stopped breathing for a second, like my chest was in shock. GOod stuff
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That’s very kind Amy..thanks so much.
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Perfectly ephemeral!
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Thanks so much Rommy.
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Beautiful
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Thanks Susie 🙂
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Bravo!
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Thanks so much..
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how powerful!
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Thanks Candy
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Great poem, lots to think about.
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Thanks, glad you liked it.
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A lot to think about here. Very good.
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you Sherry
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‘nough’ said.
gracias
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Gracias Marco Antonio 🙂
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Perfect!
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Thanks Kerry.
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An autumn song if I ever saw one!
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Thanks Magaly 🙂
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Exactly how a fire burns…
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Thanks Bjorn.. was going with Hamish’s definition of the shaman haiku as an interpretation of nature converging on an internal human experience, mediated by the shaman. It’s lovely when a haiku can be peeled to find more than one meaning!
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The power of nature caught in a few words and lines … you did a great job on this shaman-haiku … thank you for sharing Thot.
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Thank you. Am very glad you liked it.
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This is powerful – the essence of the sacred fire
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Thanks Suzanne…
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The healing power of fire!
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Yes in a way, the lessons are all in nature if we care to read them! Thank you!
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nice juxtaposition Thotpurge
much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena.
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The wind, the breeze, fanning this way, and that. A haiku like we need more of, beautifully illustrated with words within the words. Thank you – for this haiku, it runs deep.
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Thank you Hamish.. always appreciate your feedback.
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