Feel this frangible sunshine, crumbling like parchment between your fingers, scattering murmuring hieroglyphs in the dark corners of your eyes. Watch the waking birds, a soundless ripple, seven lines of gold-dusted reeds and the obstinate half-sun fleeing, once more, from the serrated jaws of the cold mountains.
Open your arms and draw them close, hear the stories they whisper in your ears, bullnosed shards of eternal life, that weave through fibre and blood, hushing your voice, teasing your hair and tracing the creased questions in your eyebrows.
Walk slowly till the weariness leaves, wafting up into the silence between the tolls of the waiting bell, until the squawking schadenfreude of the back-lit ducks ebbs all at once into the unravelling quietude.
slowly, softly,
yesterday
slides out of this morning
Your prose is poetry and your verse is sublime!
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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What a lovely ensemble! Haibun, photo and haiku. Well penned and assembled 🙂
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Thanks so much
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The first sentence is a beauty….and you continue to dazzle with a very descriptive and creative journey of tranquility. Love the haiku….the idea of yesterday sliding out of this morning…wow!
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Thanks so much!
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the intro to your poem here made me open my eyes as if to welcome a new era of peace and harmony among the peoples of the earth heralded by the waking birds in the skies and the sweetly fragile sunshine itself.
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That would be beautiful wouldn’t it! Thanks so much 🙂
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I especially like “seven lines of gold dusted reeds.”
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Thanks Victoria…I went with birds, reeds and the rising/setting sun – all real hieroglyphs..glad you liked them.
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Oh, I love those last lines, each dawn brings a new beginning. A lovely piece.
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Thanks Kelly…and your haibun was excellent, loved it.
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Rich, exquisite language adding to the feeling of tranquility of painting….
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Thank you 🙂
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I can hear those ducks now quacking thanks in the morning light that they at least are still there…never mind the rest. What a great picture you painted with your words.
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Thank you..glad you liked it.
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Delicately beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Purba.
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Fun to read your response to the combined prompts. Lots of interesting use of words here.
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Thank you 🙂
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Outstanding…beautiful haibun. I didn’t quite feel the tranquility until the last part, and love your very moving senryu.
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Thank you 🙂
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“frangible sunshine, crumbling like parchment” – how beautiful! This is lovely to read, and left me feeling very peaceful.
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Thank you Sherry 🙂
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This was lovely – thanks.
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Thank you 🙂
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Absolutely breath-taking 🙂
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂
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This is such an excellent haibun, well done
much love…
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Thanks Gillena ..glad you liked it.
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Can I be more in love with a poem? I doubt it. The slide into a new day is anticipated, fragile, sudden and welcome. I love all the diction that points to harshness and struggle and hurt, how these reside in the landscape until true awaking and mindfulness. Love it.
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Thanks so much for you kind comment Susan 🙂
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Frangible sunshine – aline in itself that gives great joy – another wonderful poem..
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Thanks so much Jae Rose 🙂
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Love the peaceful mood here, “Walk slowly till the weariness leaves, wafting up into the silence between the tolls of the waiting bell”; your haiku is so magical as a new day dawns leaving yesterday…lovely haibun!!
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Thanks so much Cheryl Lynn…
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Your prose is a poetic masterpiece in itself…fitting for Vincent’s painting. Applause!
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Thanks so much Lynn, that’s very very kind.
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This is lovely. Love your creativity. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Thank you 🙂
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So many good lines, loved ‘fleeing, once more, from the serrated jaws of the cold mountains’ 🙂
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Thanks Helen.
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Love the atmospheric write you created from the van Gogh painting. How clever of you to combine both prompts.
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Thank you Mary.. there’s something peaceful about that painting!
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inspiring prose. I like ”yesterday sliding out of this morning”.
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Absolutely fantastic… I love your choice of words, and the way it make me dive into the ripple of the canvas… and oh that haiku.. you have filled this challenge with purpose.
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Thanks so much Bjorn. That painting served as an excellent prompt.
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I like the reference to weariness and the wrinkled brows and foreheads resemble the fields …also his self portrait contains them. Nice.
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I am bowled over b the beauty of this!!
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Thank you 🙂
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A rich source of delight in both prose and senryu. I too felt that same tranquillity when looking at that landscape – who knows if that was indeed the case, given the circumstances in which it was painted?
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Thanks so much Marina..
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All lovely, but I specially liked the senryu.
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Thank you.
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“the squawking schadenfreude of the back-lit ducks”
Marvelous!
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Thanks so much.
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Loved this: ” serrated jaws of the cold mountains”. Your poem is a image feast.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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A tranquility vividly exposed. It fades with dignity slowly into the night. How nice Thot!
Hank
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Glad you liked it Hank, thank you
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So true to me.. that everyday
and every now.. even the
same place of Nature
can tale a different
story of now
the balance
of life.. in art
of emotions
senses
a delight
to carry
a bridge
of nature
across the
threshold of
self as well..:)
Wheat Springs
balance harvesting
Love as Real NOw..:)
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That’s a beautiful thot, thanks Katie 🙂
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Smiles.. Thanks for your inspiring words of poetry.:)
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This is just lovely. the prose is so poetic and full of amazing words. Thank you for joining us at d’Verse today for Haibun Monday. This was a wonderful read.
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Thank you for you kind comment.
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Your prose is so incredibly poetic. I could use it to find “delicious” words for a wordle kind of poetry. Beautiful!
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Thanks so much Victoria:)
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I specially admire the opening stanza with its frangible sunshine and soundless ripple of waking birds ~
A lovely haibun ~ Thank you for linking up with Haibun Monday at D’verse ~
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Thanks Grace 🙂
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you:)
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