caught by a warm gust
a falling cherry blossom
claims her last dance
For Poets United where the midweek prompt is Gravity.
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Incomplete Thots…
caught by a warm gust
a falling cherry blossom
claims her last dance
This is really beautiful! So many ‘last dances’ to watch this time of year!
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Thanks Mary. I liked the idea of a final act of defiance against a force of nature by something so fragile…
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Exquisite!
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Thank you 🙂
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Ah Cherry blossoms and trees so delightful – and perhaps a last triumphant dance is better than no dance at all
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Yes, especially if that dance was important to the cherry blossom..thanks so much Jae Rose.
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Beautiful! We should all fall so gracefully as earth claims her own.
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An elegant thought Susan….something to aspire to as a human being…to live and go with grace…Thanks so much.
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Such a gorgeous write 😀
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Thanks Sanaa.
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What a beautiful image. I love “claims her last dance.”
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Thank you so much Sherry
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Their time is so brief but still these cherry blossoms dance! Truly a lovely poem.
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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Beautifully done!
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Thanks Audrey!
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Isn’t it curious that we feel sad at blossoms fall but in fact it is a great joy for the cherry tree who will have a host of offspring.
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Circle of life! Thanks for visiting OldEgg!
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and why shouldn’t she claim her last dance…floating freely…
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Thanks for visiting!
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Simple and well written.
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh my, this is super!
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Thank you Candy..
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How delightful! As light and insubstantial as gossamer and yet, weighty!
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Thank you 🙂
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