to belong
the way
the ocean belongs to the rain
a bleeding wound belongs to the pain
the way
your breath
lives
for a moment
inside
this poem
Poetweet: Exactly 140 characters long including spaces and punctuation.
to belong
the way
the ocean belongs to the rain
a bleeding wound belongs to the pain
the way
your breath
lives
for a moment
inside
this poem
Poetweet: Exactly 140 characters long including spaces and punctuation.
I love the wispiness of this, and the weightiness!
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Thank you!
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Amazing how rich and flavored this is, in such a short form. Everything is said that needs to be said, and nothing that doesn’t.
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Thank you…glad you liked it.
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Just lovely !
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Thank you..
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……. and I sighed out loud at the end. so lovely!
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Glad you liked it…thanks Candy.
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I had to close my jaw upon finishing.
Beautiful
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Just perfect. And thank you for reminding me of poetweets!
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Thank you Rosemary. Love poetweets…a fun form!
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Gorgeous… 140 characters that lead to … a sigh.
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Thank you 🙂
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thanks so much.
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Perfect. Wish I said that. I’m dyslexic and thought that the rain belonged to the ocean.
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Whichever way works! Thanks Colleen.
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nice, the niche i carved out in your poem, within its frame of reference of poetry tweet
much love
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Thanks Gillena.
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well spoken, well said. all is ‘one’
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Thank you 🙂
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This is extraordinary well done.. such a great beauty to mingle with the pain and beauty… not a character misplaced.
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Thank you Bjorn…
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Nicely done! You made the most of your 140 words. 🙂
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Thank you…140 characters though…like the limit on Twitter… 🙂
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Thanks for sharing Tio 🙂
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Wow! A A heart stopping glimpse of intimacy.
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Thanks so much Tio!
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