When you open on your site & you find a solitary haiku, my first reaction is gosh, not enough poetic meat on the bone–then you read it a couple of times & it makes my 2 page prose poetic movie script seem bloated, a behemoth that requires time & effort to deal with; yours is the French entree that looks like a couple spoonfuls of nothing, but then it tastes like a platter of steaks.
Perfect haiku! Love it…
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Thank you Nicholas
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This one is great, I love the idea of the sky slipping into a boudoir … !
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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Nice image with a hint of the sensual.
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Thank you.
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When you open on your site & you find a solitary haiku, my first reaction is gosh, not enough poetic meat on the bone–then you read it a couple of times & it makes my 2 page prose poetic movie script seem bloated, a behemoth that requires time & effort to deal with; yours is the French entree that looks like a couple spoonfuls of nothing, but then it tastes like a platter of steaks.
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Those are really kind words Glenn and so beautiful. Thank you so much. Love the way you bring your scenes to life… Sheer artistry.
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This is just so sexy! 😉
Fiery Voices
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Thank you 🙂
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I love those fiery skies. Your poem and picture are a perfect match – beauty.
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Thanks so much Myrna.
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the idea of winter’s boudoir is brilliant – as we slip into sleepy dark evenings
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Thanks so much Laura…
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Great haiku.
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Thank you:)
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Beautiful, simple, pure Haiku conjuring up wonderful visions.
Thank you for visiting me at poetryofthenetherworld dot blogspot dot com
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Thank you 🙂
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There is nothing like looking forward to spending cold nights with someone warm!
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Absolutely! Thanks for stopping by OldEgg!
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Love the sound play in winter and slip…beautiful imagery in words here!
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Thank you Hannah 🙂
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Luscious!
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Thanks so much Rosemary!!
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Exquisite!
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Thank you 🙂
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Gorgeous!
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Thank you Panchali 🙂
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OH, I LOVE this! It is perfect!
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Thank you Sherry 🙂
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Ow, lovely 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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oooOOO! Who would have thought a haiku on a familiar topic could take on this new and provocative dimension? Very wonderful!
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Thanks so much Susan 😀
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a beautifully evocative and romantic haiku…
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Thank you 🙂
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a good place to reside in winter.
Fall preparation
nature prepares her bed
winter warmth
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Thank you… And love the response!! Clever!!
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Breathtaking photo accompanied by stunning haiku. It definitely does look like a ‘heart aflame.’
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Thank you Mary.
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Passion abounds in this wonderfully intense piece…if only! (well, for this reader at least)
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Thank you for stopping by Jae Rose… Who knows, right!! 🙂
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Beautiful……!!!
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Thank you Sanaa 🙂
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Lovely post.
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Thank you Mukul.
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welcome
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