the evening sky
slips into winter’s boudoir
its heart aflame

For Poets Unitedย where the prompt is “Fire”

47 thoughts on “Aflame

  1. When you open on your site & you find a solitary haiku, my first reaction is gosh, not enough poetic meat on the bone–then you read it a couple of times & it makes my 2 page prose poetic movie script seem bloated, a behemoth that requires time & effort to deal with; yours is the French entree that looks like a couple spoonfuls of nothing, but then it tastes like a platter of steaks.


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